- Microchip -

I guess it needed a checkup to see if it was running correctly. Thank you, Anne-Lise, for sharing this one with us. Way to go. Quite creative. 👍⭐. Sara K.

Creative writng, I consider microchip a boon to the advancement of technology and life.

shall we become robotic, mechanical in the near future? i hope not, anne...or ill miss your creative spins!

And diagnostic brain is an artificial tool. WHAT? That sounds right to me, it fits. Good Senryu, made me think and certainly kept any and all 'e's away from the party. Must have been fun writing this. Loathe the topic, love the poet.

Brilliantly written. Not easy to evade the letter E. Well done✨

integrated circuits made of silicon are amazing & scary, you've inspired me, Anne-Lise! Brilliant work! 👏Like & Fave

Microchip is going to be a great breakthrough of technology. I fear it is more a threat than a saviour. I don't know what this contest is about. All the best, Anne. Love and hugs 🤗

Well said in a few words, Anne-lise😊

I am really angry that Musk and his helpers are coming up with these chips that will actually in the future read our minds and control our thoughts. Right now a conspiracy theory but I kinda think they are well on their way to accomplishing this. I read an article that the lure for this chip would be that it will cure the blind, lame and deaf, etc. I would rather die than let it cure me and take control of my life!

outstanding !! sending hugs, Sara

They are here already -- almost perfected. Take one of your poems, and let AI analyze it (not to improve or change, just for analysis)...frightening how clear and concise, better than most humans can do. Really threatening.

Anne-Lise, your senryu captures the beauty of a brain effectively, using vivid imagery with "microcircuitry" to highlight the deep work of diagnostic tools..

A very clever and ingenius work, Anne-Lise. Superb actually.🔥🔥 Thanks for your review of my latest post. I value them always. Warmth and hugs Howard

waw, that's progress, i think

What a creative write with a fun picture. Love This... Hugs...  Have a fun day writing away..........

Anne-Lise, nicely done for the challenge. -hugs

You superstar Anne-Lise 😉 love the picture too hope your well hugzzzzz friend 😘🫂

Perfect senyru Anne Lise, good luck in the challenge. Hope your week is going well. Tom🌹

This is a very creative poem my dear poet friend AnneLise. Haven't tried yet a challenge at psoup. So busy at school up to now. Hope I can try someday. Good luck my dear poet friend. Hugs.

Well done with the challenge.