Michael Jordan

From Willows California, Comes one man’s poetic verse. Who was once consumed by drugs, But overturned that curse. And with the grace of God, He lives a clean and sober life. To fulfill his life’s destiny, With Antoinette his wife. He has the heart of an addict, But it’s not a choice of drugs. It’s writing out his heart, In the poetic forms he loves. He’s no longer in a cell, Under the direction of a Warden. He’s free to write his soul, And his name is Michael Jordan. _____________________________ To Michael Jordan a fellow souper, for his supportive comments, his inspiration, and hard work here on the soup and out in society...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Devonshire Avatar
February 28, 2009 at 11:12 AM
Hi Raul, I learned of MJ's past by reading his work. He fills me with inspiration as well as admiration. You capture "his soul" very well in this beautiful tribute. Love it! Carolyn
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
February 25, 2009 at 6:31 PM
A success story. Nice tribute to an awesome person. Vince
Neal Avatar
February 24, 2009 at 3:05 AM
Wow, I like the flow of this one. It reads well and the conclusion is great. Man, this one is excellent to be honest with you. DN
Winter Avatar
February 22, 2009 at 7:28 AM
Gosh - I missed a lot! So glad I caught this. An incredible tribute to one of the most beautiful people I know. You cannot say enough good things about this man. Thank you Raul for honoring such a wonderful soul whom I adore! Well done! Love, Shar
Goombi Avatar
February 18, 2009 at 11:23 PM
Pleasant words describe MJ, I like this tribute. I'm surprised on how you can capture someone so well. -Boo
Edmonds Avatar
February 18, 2009 at 11:16 PM
Deserving words to a deserving man, great job Raul, you done it again. ~Caramel
Martin Avatar
February 18, 2009 at 1:34 AM
Wow, I must say this is a nice poem, I like the whole thing, it reads well and describes Michael so well. You did a great job on this one. Tyler
Moreno Avatar
February 18, 2009 at 1:27 AM
Wonderfully done, he is an amazing poet and so are you. You really captured him with your poetic talent. I look forward to more of your tirbutes..............Danielle
P. Avatar
February 17, 2009 at 9:03 PM
beautifully done again!! wonderful your words... about a fellow poet!! your words surely reflect your appreciation and respect for a fellow souper... god bless you, Raul!! ~ Arany
Neal Avatar
February 17, 2009 at 6:24 PM
This is a wonderful tribute, it reads well all the way to the end. Love Elizabeth
Ehigiator Avatar
February 17, 2009 at 3:11 PM
Beautiful dedication and extremely well deserved..Michael is a walking miracle, he has come a long way and he is a great inspiration to so many others.He has touched many souls with his amazing poetic gift and kindness..Raul, I admire your work so much, You painted a beautiful picture here, Nicely done.God Bless*Tyesha
Koomoa Avatar
February 17, 2009 at 11:43 AM
Oh, Raul what a nice dedication to a fellow poet. I ssaw his name when I first came,but haven't visited his poetry page yet. I think I will though as i believe you intended that when you wrote this fine poem. Bravo for you, Raul I see you compassinate soul in this poem. Aloha, Koko
Swanson Avatar
February 17, 2009 at 11:30 AM
Love this one Raul! Michael is such a great souper, he has encouraged me and made me smile on more than one occasion with his thoughtful comments. Well deserved tribute for a gifted poet, and no one could write it better. Great job Raul, I have to *applaud* the poet and the subject! :) Blessings, Amy
Kelly Avatar
February 17, 2009 at 10:49 AM
Great call , Raul . MJ is proof that IT CAN be done ....!!!
Gass Avatar
February 17, 2009 at 10:36 AM
This is another beautiful write straight from your heart. A wonderful tribute to a wonderful person and talented writer. God bless you both and thanks to both of you for sharing your kindness and talents with us here. Love, Robin
Jordan Avatar
February 17, 2009 at 4:22 AM
Raul - What can a person say about that - I replaced all the people in my life (Except my wife and kids) with my friends here and this site is like my family - I never dreamed that life could be like this - it's my friends like you who make this possible - Some days I'll feel so down and I come on here and it takes it all away - Raul I thank you so much - I have a long day ahead of me and you have started it off in a wonderful way - God Bless you - YF4L, MJ
Strand Avatar
February 17, 2009 at 2:49 AM
A great and deserving tribute Raul.Well done.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Bickerstaffe Avatar
February 17, 2009 at 2:04 AM
Thanks for your kind words! This a a super tribute to MJ... he will be well pleased I'm sure. Best wishes, Keith
Martin Avatar
February 17, 2009 at 1:16 AM
Deserving tribute Raul, you penned this one down nicely. I'm sure Michael will enjoy it. Tyler
Neal Avatar
February 17, 2009 at 12:52 AM
Nice poem Raul, I agree he has been through so much and still blesses us with his great work. DN
Finnigan Avatar
February 16, 2009 at 6:57 PM
Gee Raul, I have to say that I thought when people commented on my poetry, they'd be commenting on my poetry - not their own...
Richards Avatar
February 16, 2009 at 6:36 PM
A wonderful tribute to someone who has overcome so much, and has been an inspiration to so many. Great job, Raul...such honest, and loving words, about our friend. PS wouldn't be the same without him. ~ Carrie
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February 16, 2009 at 5:01 PM
Wonderful dedication to a talented and inspirational writer. Blessings to you for sharing this poem with us! Karen
Parish Avatar
February 16, 2009 at 4:59 PM
Fantastic write that is well deserved for our fellow poet Michael Jordan. His words well written have touched us all.
La France Avatar
February 16, 2009 at 4:41 PM
I feel the same.. a wonderful poet and I think a man with an abundance of spirit and soul.. his journey has not been easy.. a wonderful tribute.. thanks for doing it..
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