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Mi Amor

My Love, of a thousand years The first to hold my hand To touch my skin, my lips The one who held me close As I cried for my sadness At Life’s daily losses And laughed with me, In my triumphs And now, my Love, There is an emptiness beside me Where once, you stood.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 1/2/2010 1:25:00 PM
A lost love, So heartwrenching, dear Reem. Thank your for sharing your emotions with us. Lainie
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Date: 1/1/2010 5:43:00 PM
Grats on having your poem featured bud. Lost love leaves an ache in your heart, the worst feeling in the world, and I truly believe that.
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Date: 12/31/2009 1:08:00 PM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A well deserved honor.
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Date: 12/29/2009 7:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Reem. I wish you the best with your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/28/2009 3:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine poem being featured this week, Happy New Year >> James
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Date: 2/17/2009 8:03:00 PM
Reem, great expression of the sorrow we experience when we lose a loved one. I hope you have found another! Bless you, Carolyn
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Date: 9/2/2008 6:43:00 PM
Such longing here. Poetic sad longing. ~Carrie
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Date: 8/12/2008 1:09:00 PM
A remarkable Free verse Poem -most enchanting-enveloped in gloom -heart rending. I pray for more success to come. Thanks for your comments on my poem The Defaulter.
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Date: 8/12/2008 1:07:00 PM
A remarkable Free verse Poem -most enchanting-enveoped in gloom -heart rending. I pray for more success to come. Thanks for your comments on my poem The Defaulter.
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Date: 8/8/2008 1:04:00 PM
a very touching piece of poetry, and so warm to read.
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Date: 8/8/2008 11:48:00 AM
Oh, so heartbreaking...what a simple, beautiful poem of love lost. Very well written, Kristin
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