Me,The Diapered Kid

Cupid's arrow missed your heart,
an uphill task waits for me,
should I be diapered kid
and try my hand once?



© kashinath karmakar
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Placement: 4th;(March 2011)

Contest:Winged Cupid

Sponsor:Dr. Ram Mehta

By:kashinath karmakar (16th March 2011)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
October 30, 2011 at 1:07 AM
I'll come back here to tell you, Kash, the answer is simple. they did not read your poem. Otherwise they would not have said those stupid things. I think one of them just read the last few lines of your poem and that's why she responded the way she did. believe me, it happens all the time! people not really reading one's poem.
Brown Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 11:04 AM
Congratulations to you Kashinath for your win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Winged Cupid". Love, Carol
George   Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 10:38 AM
Many congrat's on your win,Kashinath. Elaine
Muzzey Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 8:22 AM
A wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. Congratulations on your fourth place win. Caryl
Neels Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 6:20 AM
Hey there Kash, how are you? Congratulations on your win, so cool to read this one again ;) WNN
Mannan Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 10:08 PM
Wow Kashi. Many many congrats on this wonderful win.
Freeman Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 9:09 PM
Good to see you at the top Kashinath. Congratulations with this worthy honored fourth place. Agape, Moses
Horne Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 3:37 PM
Congrats on your win : ) Jack
Sweetheart Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 3:21 PM
Congrats Kashinath on your wonderful success in the Cupid contest my friend.. amazing words of delight.. enjoy with luv..
Dietrich Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 3:20 PM
hahaha, that diapered kid got a great spot on the list! Congratulations, Kash.
Richards Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 3:16 PM
How cute is this!! Congratulations, Kashinath!!
Devonshire Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 3:14 PM
Kashinath, Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Falotico Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 3:01 PM
Well done KK, Congrats my friend..
Mehta Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 2:42 PM
Congratulations on the fourth place win in my contest, kashinath
Neels Avatar
March 18, 2011 at 3:22 AM
Kash this is hilarious, I would not mind having a cupid like you around lol, good luck for the contest.. Once again loads of laughs :)
Mehta Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 1:57 PM
Soup mail!!
Falotico Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 1:46 PM
Very good entry my dear friend... should do well.... and thank you for the tip on my poem, as always I type way to fast lol... always Michael
Kendrick Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 1:24 PM
You would probably make a great cupid..Enjoyed reading your work...Thanks for stopping by ...In nearly everything I see, a poem enlightening speaks to me..Sara
Onclaud Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 12:54 PM
cool one, kashi... a giggle wraps my heart! best winning wishes, yeah! :) huggs, nette
Sweetheart Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 5:08 AM
Sweet cute and clever piece Kashinath.. good luck in the contest by Dr. Ram.. and thankxx so very much for the correction luv.. appreciate good friends like u and Andrea on the entry for Robb.. I have since written another entry .. luv..
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March 17, 2011 at 12:17 AM
Andrea, I am happy that I made you people laugh .I like smiling face of people around me.I googled This kid and Wikipedia is telling that this kid may be naked or diapered:I went for the 2nd option:)
Dietrich Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 10:28 PM
hahaha, I wonder where you got diapered kid from? You are too funny, Kash! I like what CArolyn said to you. Take pictures of yourself in the diaper and post on FB! I hope this does well for you my friend!!
Kopp Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 8:36 PM
let em fly
Mehta Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 2:24 PM
Thanks for your entry in my contest, kashinath
Devonshire Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 1:29 PM
Very funny, Kashinath! If you put on that diaper, but sure to take some pictures you can share with us. Best wishes in Dr. Ram's contest! Love, Carolyn
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