Meteorological Migraine

There’s rain in my brain,
A pitter patter on the old grey matter,
Cats and dogs in the cerebral cogs,
A shower dampening my mental power.
There’s precipitation in my imagination,
A cloud collision in my vision,
A deluge in my centrifuge,
A tidal surge has overwhelmed my optimistic urge,
A tsunami is rampaging through my spiritual harmony,
A lighting strobe just struck my frontal lobe.
There’s a vortex in my cortex,
An eddy in my heady,
A blizzard in my gizzard,
Hail in my vapour trail,
Sleet on my feet,
Snow on my big toe
Making me feel low.

I’ll pop a pill and rest my head
Upon a bed of feather
And when I wake I’m hoping
For bright eyes and better weather.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 10:07 PM
wOW, this is SUPER clever. Just finished reading IVO and now this. Awesome guys you are. FAVE on this one.
Hamilton Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 5:43 PM
imaginative write Alex welcome to soup hugs
Frankel Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 3:09 AM
thanks Shadow :)
Lamoureux Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 5:29 PM
This is a tsunami of fun Alex, I predict clear sailing here on out.
Frankel Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 3:07 AM
:) thanks Richard !
Palmer Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 6:10 PM
wonderful write with a lot of joy,,,love it Alex
Frankel Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 4:01 AM
thanks Richard!
Allison Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 2:08 PM
Incredibly clever write Alex it brought sunshine into my smile! Hugs Jan xx
Frankel Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 3:19 PM
thanks Jan ! ha ha, very good :):)
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