Meteorological Migraine

There’s rain in my brain,
A pitter patter on the old grey matter,
Cats and dogs in the cerebral cogs,
A shower dampening my mental power.
There’s precipitation in my imagination,
A cloud collision in my vision,
A deluge in my centrifuge,
A tidal surge has overwhelmed my optimistic urge,
A tsunami is rampaging through my spiritual harmony,
A lighting strobe just struck my frontal lobe.
There’s a vortex in my cortex,
An eddy in my heady,
A blizzard in my gizzard,
Hail in my vapour trail,
Sleet on my feet,
Snow on my big toe
Making me feel low.

I’ll pop a pill and rest my head
Upon a bed of feather
And when I wake I’m hoping
For bright eyes and better weather.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 5/8/2014 10:07:00 PM
wOW, this is SUPER clever. Just finished reading IVO and now this. Awesome guys you are. FAVE on this one.
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Date: 5/7/2014 5:43:00 PM
imaginative write Alex welcome to soup hugs
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Alex Frankel
Date: 5/8/2014 3:09:00 AM
thanks Shadow :)
Date: 5/7/2014 5:29:00 PM
This is a tsunami of fun Alex, I predict clear sailing here on out.
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Alex Frankel
Date: 5/8/2014 3:07:00 AM
:) thanks Richard !
Date: 5/6/2014 6:10:00 PM
wonderful write with a lot of joy,,,love it Alex
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Date: 5/7/2014 4:01:00 AM
thanks Richard!
Date: 5/5/2014 2:08:00 PM
Incredibly clever write Alex it brought sunshine into my smile! Hugs Jan xx
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Alex Frankel
Date: 5/5/2014 3:19:00 PM
thanks Jan ! ha ha, very good :):)
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