Meteorological Depression Haiku

Warm front then cold front
Low atmospheric pressure
Cloudy windy rain


(Entry for "depression is a short poem" competition)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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December 7, 2016 at 5:38 AM
Wonderful and so clever! I love it. Good luck in the contest :)
Martin Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 12:47 PM
Thanks Darren! :-)
Dietrich Avatar
December 4, 2016 at 4:12 PM
great imagination for this theme. it's filling fast and right now, I got NADA
Martin Avatar
December 4, 2016 at 4:24 PM
Thanks Andrea! Best of luck - funnily enough I find that ideas pop into my head when they're least expected - and most inconvenient!
Allison Avatar
December 4, 2016 at 1:57 PM
clever take on the theme!:-) hugs Jan xx
Allison Avatar
December 4, 2016 at 5:58 PM
ha ha ha I know Martin I live on the IOM :-) hugs Jan xx
Martin Avatar
December 4, 2016 at 2:04 PM
Our favourite topic of conversation in the UK! Thanks for the feedback! :-)
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