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Meteor Shower

Your stars are falling gracefully, but mine are crashing. Your resentment is painfully justified. But my love is too. thoughts swarm the universe the world I created in my own head where you read me your verse and I add another a world where I don’t have to wait for your stars to follow mine Or some sort of fairytale fate because we’re effortlessly aligned I tell you “my thoughts are like a meteor shower” you tell me “meteors crash” But they’re also radiant creating a beam that’s hard to ignore so I don’t mind if we crash even if you embed your stars into my mind

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Date: 11/7/2023 6:09:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 11/6/2023 7:04:00 PM
Love it!
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Date: 11/6/2023 12:34:00 AM
A good poem. Well done.
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