Metaphor Remix

A language with so many sides
makes it hard to decide
which words I should use.
I get so confused!

Don’t throw out the baby with spilled milk?
Turn a sow’s ear into a purse of silk?
That bridge has sailed or burned, I’m told,
It seems this dog has grown too old!

A house of cards divided can’t win them all?
The grass is always greener before the fall?
I really should be sawing logs,
Instead, I’m kicking sleeping dogs!

A bird in the hand gathers no moss?
When you come to that bridge, look before you cross?
My chickens hatched before I could count them,
And there is no brass ring at the rainbow’s end!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Anglesey Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 9:21 PM
I really enjoyed this mixed up rendition of mixed up sayings. Very witty :)
Watkins Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 9:26 PM
Ooh, I like a girl that calls me "witty." Careful, it will go to my head! Thank you for your comments. I do appreciate them.
Dietrich Avatar
March 1, 2014 at 1:32 AM
You did a very clever job mixing up those idioms. I really like this kind of poetry!!
Watkins Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 9:26 PM
Honestly, I was bored. I either read or heard an idiom and thought back to when I was teaching my 6th graders about idioms (a very hard concept for a non-native English speaker to grasp). We had a lot of fun amidst the confusion, but in the end, they had a deeper appreciation for the nuances of language.
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