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Metamorphosis

I am the one till the end of the dark path. I am the one and then someone else. Opening the gates of doubts and I search for traces of life. All the cells of my mind unlocked the detained prisoners are ignored. I am the one until the moment my pulses begin an unruly dance. And then, someone else, the other smiles ironically once more. Till the end of the dark path, till the sorrow’s borders, the one was the other and both together, the intangible.

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Date: 8/6/2016 8:33:00 AM
Excellent piece, congrats.
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Miltos Gitas
Date: 8/8/2016 3:31:00 AM
Richard, thank you very much.
Date: 8/6/2016 2:12:00 AM
Miltos, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Stop by my blog "BOSSY COW." if you'd like, enjoy my sheer, simple madness. Hugs ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/6/2016 5:03:00 AM
Very good news today. I am happy to eighth place in the competition. Being always creative my good friend. Of course I will visit your blog ...
Date: 7/30/2016 4:01:00 PM
Hints of dark romance. Definitely good poem noir. Good, proper choice of words
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Date: 7/30/2016 4:23:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words. So are most of my poems. I will be glad to read your comments. You look and your own poems in the coming days ...
Date: 7/30/2016 10:31:00 AM
That is beautiful and sad and deep. It is both intangible and tangible at the same time. Kafka does come to mind, not simply because of the title. I like that poem.
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Date: 7/30/2016 4:29:00 PM
I love Kafka. I've read years ago. This poem has within him all my soul. Thank you for your words. I will be glad to talk together on poetry themes...
Date: 7/29/2016 7:33:00 AM
Miltos, amazing word and write. A true 7. LINDA
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Miltos Gitas
Date: 7/29/2016 4:09:00 PM
Linda thank you. I Write for me ang for poet inside me...
Date: 7/28/2016 4:45:00 AM
Wow, Miltos, you seem to be very experienced. I love everything about this epic write... Skat
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Date: 7/28/2016 6:04:00 AM
Thank you from my heart . I write several years . I will be glad to often talk.

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