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For the Metamorphosis Poetry Contest of Unseeking Seeker

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Metamorphosis

Like chrysalises or cocoons,
Each day we grow plumper,
not as insects feeding on leaves,
but as humans 
consuming the totality
of lessons learned from our life experiences,
for life is our chrysalises stage
in which we glean interests -
those things which feed
our soul.
From both the good and the bad,
we learn and we then choose
what our attitude will be
regarding all that we have absorbed.

Death is not an ending,
and though it may seem outwardly
that we wither away like wilted roses,
our souls are preparing
for an emergence!
We grow sick from aging
and feel sometimes like we
 are hanging upside down.
Then comes that magical moment
of metamorphosis.
Our souls break free
from the flesh to which they've been tethered.
Our loved ones cannot see it happening,
but we begin to turn into beings
of light.
Butterflies, brightly illuminated,
we will fly to the home
which for a brief time on this earth
had been concealed from us.
At last the veil will fall
from our eyes.

Oh, open your spiritual eyes,
sweet butterfly,
and know with all your senses
(even those senses you’d forgotten
that you had previously possessed)
you are home,
and home is a glowing place of
all-encompassing
love.
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Beaufort Avatar
July 26, 2024 at 5:18 AM
Andrea, interesting take and comparison concerning life's transitions. While my own take is different, I'm glad your faith in the after helps you visualize all this. Smiling! We are all a bit unique!
Onclaud Avatar
July 22, 2024 at 10:26 AM
you nailed it with a bronze win for this contest, andie...congrats!
Dietrich Avatar
July 22, 2024 at 3:17 PM
Thanks. This win made me feel great.
Norton Avatar
July 22, 2024 at 10:06 AM
Do I detect an increasing degree of spirtuality in your writing? I think this is a monumental write. Just as importantly, you straddle the poetry universe to illuminate readers of all persuasions. No wonder that PoetrySoup is a "glowing place of all-encompassing love." Because you make it so. Luv, Bryan
Dietrich Avatar
July 22, 2024 at 3:16 PM
You are very perceptive , my friend. I have been looking into near death experiences and realizing that when I die, I will escape my health issues and be far happier. The big thing is just show love and kindness even in this politically divided atmosphere I find myself in! Thank you, Bryan.
Empress Avatar
July 22, 2024 at 9:02 AM
I knew this would score high sweet andrea: congratulations!
Dietrich Avatar
July 22, 2024 at 3:16 PM
Thanks so much, sweetie.
George Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 9:33 PM
Lots of feelings come with life and ageing. However, growth comes in handy. It comes after our mixed experiences. There are many things our loved ones don't see while with us. "Then comes that magical moment of metamorphosis. Our souls break free from the flesh to which they've been tethered." Very powerful.
Dietrich Avatar
July 17, 2024 at 1:22 PM
thanks, dear poet
George Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 9:04 PM
"Death is not an ending, and though it may seem outwardly that we wither away like wilted roses, our souls are preparing for an emergence!".... So true. After our earthly existence, we reach a beautiful stage when like butterflies, emerging from chrysalises, we will flit on radiant wings.... no more to perish. Beautiful poem, dear Andrea.
Dietrich Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 9:05 PM
Thanks, Valsa
Empress Avatar
July 13, 2024 at 6:07 AM
This is beyond powerful and so fitting for the theme too, your use of metaphors and creative wordplay as well as how youv delivered such deeply meaningful lines is beyond impressive and impeccable. “ Death is not an ending, and though it may seem outwardly that we wither away like wilted roses, our souls are preparing for an emergence!” These lines really stood out for me! I think this will do well in the contest! Best wishes
Dietrich Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 8:31 PM
I sure hope so, Ink. I felt inspired by this one
Buehler Avatar
July 12, 2024 at 11:03 PM
So beautiful, Andrea. I love the butterfly metahor. This is a fave.
Dietrich Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 8:31 PM
Thanks, dear
Onclaud Avatar
July 12, 2024 at 5:58 PM
the transformational grip of your lovely verse brings me to a higher level of reflection...wonderful, andie!
Dietrich Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 8:31 PM
Thanks , Nette. I had fun with this one
Goldsmith Avatar
July 12, 2024 at 10:39 AM
WOW!!! I really enjoyed reading your write. "Good Luck" FAV for me.... Have a great day..............................
Dietrich Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 8:31 PM
Thanks so much!
Narain Avatar
July 12, 2024 at 10:02 AM
Nice poem.
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