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For the Metamorphosis Poetry Contest of Unseeking Seeker

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Like chrysalises or cocoons, Each day we grow plumper, not as insects feeding on leaves, but as humans consuming the totality of lessons learned from our life experiences, for life is our chrysalises stage in which we glean interests - those things which feed our soul. From both the good and the bad, we learn and we then choose what our attitude will be regarding all that we have absorbed. Death is not an ending, and though it may seem outwardly that we wither away like wilted roses, our souls are preparing for an emergence! We grow sick from aging and feel sometimes like we are hanging upside down. Then comes that magical moment of metamorphosis. Our souls break free from the flesh to which they've been tethered. Our loved ones cannot see it happening, but we begin to turn into beings of light. Butterflies, brightly illuminated, we will fly to the home which for a brief time on this earth had been concealed from us. At last the veil will fall from our eyes. Oh, open your spiritual eyes, sweet butterfly, and know with all your senses (even those senses you’d forgotten that you had previously possessed) you are home, and home is a glowing place of all-encompassing love.

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Date: 7/26/2024 5:18:00 AM
Andrea, interesting take and comparison concerning life's transitions. While my own take is different, I'm glad your faith in the after helps you visualize all this. Smiling! We are all a bit unique!
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Date: 7/22/2024 10:26:00 AM
you nailed it with a bronze win for this contest, andie...congrats!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/22/2024 3:17:00 PM
Thanks. This win made me feel great.
Date: 7/22/2024 10:06:00 AM
Do I detect an increasing degree of spirtuality in your writing? I think this is a monumental write. Just as importantly, you straddle the poetry universe to illuminate readers of all persuasions. No wonder that PoetrySoup is a "glowing place of all-encompassing love." Because you make it so. Luv, Bryan
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/22/2024 3:16:00 PM
You are very perceptive , my friend. I have been looking into near death experiences and realizing that when I die, I will escape my health issues and be far happier. The big thing is just show love and kindness even in this politically divided atmosphere I find myself in! Thank you, Bryan.
Date: 7/22/2024 9:02:00 AM
I knew this would score high sweet andrea: congratulations!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/22/2024 3:16:00 PM
Thanks so much, sweetie.
Date: 7/16/2024 9:33:00 PM
Lots of feelings come with life and ageing. However, growth comes in handy. It comes after our mixed experiences. There are many things our loved ones don't see while with us. "Then comes that magical moment of metamorphosis. Our souls break free from the flesh to which they've been tethered." Very powerful.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/17/2024 1:22:00 PM
thanks, dear poet
Date: 7/14/2024 9:04:00 PM
"Death is not an ending, and though it may seem outwardly that we wither away like wilted roses, our souls are preparing for an emergence!".... So true. After our earthly existence, we reach a beautiful stage when like butterflies, emerging from chrysalises, we will flit on radiant wings.... no more to perish. Beautiful poem, dear Andrea.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/14/2024 9:05:00 PM
Thanks, Valsa
Date: 7/13/2024 6:07:00 AM
This is beyond powerful and so fitting for the theme too, your use of metaphors and creative wordplay as well as how youv delivered such deeply meaningful lines is beyond impressive and impeccable. “ Death is not an ending, and though it may seem outwardly that we wither away like wilted roses, our souls are preparing for an emergence!” These lines really stood out for me! I think this will do well in the contest! Best wishes
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/14/2024 8:31:00 PM
I sure hope so, Ink. I felt inspired by this one
Date: 7/12/2024 11:03:00 PM
So beautiful, Andrea. I love the butterfly metahor. This is a fave.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/14/2024 8:31:00 PM
Thanks, dear
Date: 7/12/2024 5:58:00 PM
the transformational grip of your lovely verse brings me to a higher level of reflection...wonderful, andie!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/14/2024 8:31:00 PM
Thanks , Nette. I had fun with this one
Date: 7/12/2024 10:39:00 AM
WOW!!! I really enjoyed reading your write. "Good Luck" FAV for me.... Have a great day..............................
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/14/2024 8:31:00 PM
Thanks so much!
Date: 7/12/2024 10:02:00 AM
Nice poem.
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