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once motes on the leaf now creepy caterpillars soon flying colors

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Date: 5/18/2022 10:49:00 PM
I love the hope implied by the stages in the life of a butterfly. "Flying colors", beautiful image and thought-provoking, Valsa. Warm wishes ~ John
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Date: 5/18/2022 2:51:00 PM
Chrysalis...a quiescent insect. "the splitting of the chrysalis and the slow unfolding of the wings" Beautiful haiku and photo.
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Date: 5/18/2022 12:49:00 PM
Nature is truly amazing, and natures colors spellbound me - Valsa when did you start writing poetry, you are truly a talented poetess. Hugs and blessings my friend, Jennifer.
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Date: 5/18/2022 11:39:00 AM
After seeing a caterpillar, everyone should know there is hope for a more beautiful future! Enjoyed, Valsa! Aloha!
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Date: 5/18/2022 9:55:00 AM
Dear Valsa, I love butterflies.
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Date: 5/18/2022 9:31:00 AM
The creative soul is all about metamorphosis. Great Haiku, Valsa. Blessings
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Date: 5/18/2022 8:03:00 AM
Transformative ink here, Valsa. :)
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Date: 5/18/2022 7:58:00 AM
Great one Valsa :)
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Date: 5/18/2022 7:52:00 AM
Each line an image of nature's wonder. Beautiful poem, Valsa.
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