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Metamorphosis - Itty Bitty Version

Caterpillar crawling – Fat and fuzzy. Footstep falling – Flat and scuzzy. for Andrea's Itty Bitty Contest

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/20/2014 12:46:00 PM

ILENE, Congratulations, the poem is awesome. Enjoyed your winning poem. Happy Easter, luv LINDA

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/19/2014 9:31:00 AM

How can we not smile while reading this little gem? Loved it Ilene !! Congrats to you!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/19/2014 12:44:00 AM

Fine poetry and a great win Ilene ,,,, Congrats !

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/19/2014 12:13:00 AM

Awwww, kind of sad, yet funny too Ilene. All my favorite poets seem to have entered this contest. Congratulations on your wonderful win!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/18/2014 11:40:00 PM

Of the funny ones I got, I think this one was the best. WELL done. I loved it. Congrats in my contest.

Robert Johnson

Date: 4/13/2014 2:02:00 PM

Fuzzy wasn't fuzzy anymore. Was he.

Paul Callus

Date: 4/11/2014 2:23:00 PM

Oh my! what a change! poor thing! better luck than the caterpillar :) // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 4/20/2014 5:01:00 AM

congrats on fine win, Ilene :) Happy Easter. // paul

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 4/11/2014 2:19:00 PM

Cute, Cute! well done. BG

Jan Allison

Date: 4/11/2014 1:29:00 PM

Love the alliteration and rhyme and the humour at the end - good luck in the contest. RIP little caterpillar :-( Hugs Jan xx