Metamorphosed

Breezes brush through the window caressingly,
soft fanning wings powdering my skin;
night's black velvet pricked only by the porch light's glow.
Alone, I feel no fear. Gliding the dark, my twin
has turned gossamer wings toward my tiny light-
metamorphosed--a radiant night creature.
I breathlessly await like culminating event,
faith strengthened by this moth miracle of nature.

Heaven's windows are always flung wide open;
the porches blaze in one eternal, flaming light.
Souls released from dull cocoon entrapments 
wing into endless day free of sin's blight.
Life's thin film is splitting, revealing the heart;
spirit wings unfurl, lift and upward start.

Copyright, November 2, 2014
Faye Lanham Gibson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Marcum Wong Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 9:54 PM
Congratulations on your win with this excellent entry Faye!
Kimathi Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 3:20 AM
Your verse gives a deep feeling of rebirth to even the most silent of souls.... Applause to your great WIN Faye! ^_^
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 9:05 PM
Congrats, Faye! I enjoyed your beautiful words of faith...hugs, Rhonda
Allison Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 12:07 PM
dropping back with my congratulations Faye:-) Hugs Jan xx
Mohn Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 6:30 PM
This is just beautiful Faye...I love your take on this contest
Jerden Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 3:17 PM
Wonderful, Faye! So expressive and mysterious... Good luck!
A. Sharma Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 6:32 AM
Captivating beauty Faye! Lovely thoughtful words! Gl in contest!
Richards Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 4:41 PM
Faith strengthened by such miracles......, such indeed is a miracle of life. A beautiful, breathlessly lovely poem! Good luck !
Allison Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 4:37 PM
simply stunning Faye! I am certain that Craig will love the imagery here - fabulous sonnet:-) Hugs Jan xx
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