Met-A-Four

“Met-a-Four”


I “met a four”
when I was three
and oh the things
it did to me
and fingers counting
one-two- three.
When the four
brought in a five
all my counting fingers
came alive.
Reaching for the
other hand
said “times two”
is oh so grand.
They ran through
six, then seven – eight
danced with the nine
to celebrate.
Then the quantum leap
to ten
and shouts of 
let’s do it again.
Somehow the
ones and two and threes
increase in size
exponentially.
Still, my fingers are
mathematically smitten
seeking warmth
within a mitten.


John G. Lawless
12/4/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Walker Avatar
December 22, 2020 at 2:30 AM
Haha ok, so there is your playful side. Nice piece, a double entendre? Or is it just me?? LOL
Saxena Avatar
January 8, 2018 at 7:01 AM
cute piece of writing
Dutta Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 10:47 PM
WOW!Nicely composed.Too Good. Happy New Year
Telemacque Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 2:07 PM
Nice poem. Very creative with the numbers
Jarvis Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 10:15 AM
Loved this, thank you.
De Rose Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 9:11 AM
John, that was a real fun poem, put a smile on my face. Please read my poems if you have a moment. One of my poems is about a lady from my church. Another is about an old pal who passed away and the last was is a tribute to my Dad written 2 weeks after he passed away. Thank you for your poem... Dennis De Rose
Ellison Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 8:48 AM
BRILLIANT!!!!!!!! Cheers, Jack
Loughman Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 8:20 AM
John, Very imaginative and entertaining! Thank you for posting! Happy New Year:-)
Allison Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 8:17 AM
love the title and what a clever poem John!:-) hugs jan xx
Kroll Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 9:08 AM
Love the rhyme. So much fun.
Fame Avatar
June 8, 2016 at 12:12 PM
I love it! It's great!
Dietrich Avatar
December 4, 2014 at 9:48 PM
OMG this is ADORABLE. FAVe!!!
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