Met-A-Four

“Met-a-Four”


I “met a four”
when I was three
and oh the things
it did to me
and fingers counting
one-two- three.
When the four
brought in a five
all my counting fingers
came alive.
Reaching for the
other hand
said “times two”
is oh so grand.
They ran through
six, then seven – eight
danced with the nine
to celebrate.
Then the quantum leap
to ten
and shouts of 
let’s do it again.
Somehow the
ones and two and threes
increase in size
exponentially.
Still, my fingers are
mathematically smitten
seeking warmth
within a mitten.


John G. Lawless
12/4/2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/22/2020 2:30:00 AM
Haha ok, so there is your playful side. Nice piece, a double entendre? Or is it just me?? LOL
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Date: 1/8/2018 7:01:00 AM
cute piece of writing
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Date: 1/5/2018 10:47:00 PM
WOW!Nicely composed.Too Good. Happy New Year
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Date: 1/2/2018 2:07:00 PM
Nice poem. Very creative with the numbers
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Date: 1/2/2018 10:15:00 AM
Loved this, thank you.
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Date: 1/2/2018 9:11:00 AM
John, that was a real fun poem, put a smile on my face. Please read my poems if you have a moment. One of my poems is about a lady from my church. Another is about an old pal who passed away and the last was is a tribute to my Dad written 2 weeks after he passed away. Thank you for your poem... Dennis De Rose
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Date: 1/2/2018 8:48:00 AM
BRILLIANT!!!!!!!! Cheers, Jack
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Date: 1/2/2018 8:20:00 AM
John, Very imaginative and entertaining! Thank you for posting! Happy New Year:-)
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Date: 1/2/2018 8:17:00 AM
love the title and what a clever poem John!:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/16/2016 9:08:00 AM
Love the rhyme. So much fun.
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Date: 6/8/2016 12:12:00 PM
I love it! It's great!
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Date: 12/4/2014 9:48:00 PM
OMG this is ADORABLE. FAVe!!!
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