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Messenger

Balloon floating high His messenger in the sky And what did he write Before the Balloon took flight Alas its flown out of sight

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Edward Ebbs

Date: 11/7/2015 9:04:00 AM

Congrats on your featured poem...a question, was it his message or your message. That would be so cool, kind of like a message in a bottle :)

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 11/4/2015 6:44:00 AM

A beautiful suspense in the end.... Congrats for having your work featured in Poetry Soup home page! ;-)

Skat A

Date: 11/3/2015 9:53:00 PM

Sharon, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured in the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~

Daver Austin

Date: 11/3/2015 1:40:00 PM

We shall never know, but maybe some Chinaman? Congrats, daver

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/4/2011 4:38:00 PM

oh, a cute rhyming tanka!!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/4/2010 1:15:00 PM

I like the air of mystery in your tanka about the "messenger," Sharon. Sometimes no matter how hard we look, we never find the answers. Very intriguing tanka. Best wishes, Carolyn