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Her funeral held earlier that day,
in her coffin she held her mobile phone,
she told him that she wanted it that way
and now he crept off up to bed alone.
He tossed and turned, his was a fitful sleep,
he dreamed of her, and things that might have been,
at midnight his phone gave a gentle beep
he looked and saw her name lit on the screen.
In disbelief, he read the message sent,
Just three words, 'I love you' in the text
how could this be? For this all made no sense
sleep left him now, he lay awake, perplexed.
His phone beeped at midnight on the next day
the same three words, same number, the same phone,
night after night repeated, so in dismay
powered off, into the bin it was thrown.
New phone, new number, that should be alright,
contacted all his friends to let them know
but his sound sleep was broken at midnight
two gentle beeps, the screen was now aglow.
Each night he agonised ' why must this be?
Inside his head, the seeds of doubt were sown
'our married life was happy as can be,
near perfect' but if only he had known
the one thing that she never forgave
that three word phrase, he never had said it
she now tortured him from beyond the grave,
her phone topped up with eternal credit.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Thomas Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 9:12 PM
Viv Wigley I was all prepared to tell you how awesomely disturbing this was and then I read your comment to Harry below! Now all I can do is laugh!
Horsman Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 5:08 PM
Wow scary, but the point comes out Viv, great poetry
Wigley Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 8:36 PM
Thanks, Harry, I'm having my missus cremated :)
Salehi Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 1:25 PM
Nice story, Good idea, I will take my phone with me to haunt a few people.....
Wigley Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 8:36 PM
Don't forget to charge the battery, Pashang! Regards, Viv
Krampe Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 8:14 AM
Great idea and storytelling, Viv - I enjoyed your poem.
Wigley Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 8:37 PM
Thanks, Agnes, me in spooky mood. Viv x
Pett Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 4:25 AM
I really enjoyed this thought provoking poem Viv, imaginative and so well written. :))
Wigley Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 8:37 PM
Thanks Roy, I like to think that there is no need for phones in the hereafter, though.... Regards, Viv
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 2:56 AM
I love mysteries like this where strange things do happen with no explanation. There is just so much we don't know. A great poem Viv! You are a master at rhyme! : )
Wigley Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 8:38 PM
Thanks, Connie, very kind. Viv x
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