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Message In the Bottle

An explode in time when mine mind did move through mine digits not mine lips

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/30/2012 8:29:00 AM

I remember those digits :)

Joe Maverick

Date: 5/25/2012 4:09:00 PM

Really enjoyed this today James..)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/25/2012 9:30:00 AM

quizzical and yet mind blowing, james... :) huggs!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/24/2012 4:31:00 PM

Good one..If we could all type it out before we exploded, this might be a better world in which to live..Enjoyed reading ..I redid my entry into Joe Maverick's contest..You might want to recheck what I changed it to..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/24/2012 3:45:00 PM

Just reading comments below since I am not sure what you meant here. I got a kick out of what Daver had to say!!

Diane Christian

Date: 5/24/2012 3:11:00 PM

aw lovley work, thanks for your kind comments, my daughter wasvery brave and is going to fracture clinic tomorrw for an x ray to check the bone, Gos has everything in his hand. God bless you from diane and thanks

Daver Austin

Date: 5/24/2012 9:10:00 AM

This is too deep for me, Sir James. Mine digits have only allowed me to count to 10. Mine mind was in time lost completely. Love, daver

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/23/2012 10:02:00 PM

James, this is a great monoku... thank you for sharing... good night..pd

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 5/23/2012 4:36:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your monoku...thanks for sharing..INK-U-SCRIPT