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Message In a Bottle

What trouble’s brewed in the sea. The bold lettering spells it out. - says the poet MESSAGE IN A BOTTLE B eached on this death trap island, and bereft o f bread and lodging. Have you found my t ow? Desperately need you to return it! T errible storm tossed me overboard. Waves high. L ying! It was my first mate! He’s had a laugh at my e xpense. He won’t forgive me for drinking his rum…

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Jan Allison

Date: 8/31/2021 3:17:00 PM

this is SO creative Kim am amazed i havent commented on it before, i hope I can write for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/31/2021 3:24:00 PM

Thank you so much, Jan! :)

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 1/16/2017 12:29:00 PM

Very creative, a fav!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/16/2017 1:08:00 PM

Awesome! Thanks, Maurice! I have posted a contest which requires a likewise acrostic. Perhaps, you will give it a try?

Ironic Zink

Date: 1/15/2017 9:21:00 AM

Nice example and funny too. I may give your contest a go yet.

Ironic Zink
Date: 1/20/2017 12:15:00 PM

I made it into your contest!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/15/2017 11:15:00 AM

Thank you Ir0nic! I hope you do! :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/14/2017 2:22:00 AM

This one is very cool and clever, Kim:) an excellent example:)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/14/2017 8:02:00 AM

Thank you, Jo :)

Agnes Krampe

Date: 1/13/2017 10:37:00 PM

Nicely done, Kim. Looks like you had fun with this :) It's great to see an example for what you're after with your contest.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/13/2017 10:50:00 PM

Thank you, Agnes! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/13/2017 6:34:00 PM

HA. I had to write the letters down to "see it" but it ended the poem VERY nicely!! Hope I am up for your challenge, KIm! Good model for us.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/13/2017 6:42:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea! Looking forward to the entries!

Deborah Burch

Date: 1/13/2017 4:50:00 PM

Bahahahaha!!! Kim!! Now that's funny rite there!! ;) I may consider having a go but I'm with Chris. I think you make it look so easy...;) big hugs!! Deb

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/13/2017 6:39:00 PM

Thanks, Deborah! You make me smile!

Chris Green

Date: 1/13/2017 4:06:00 PM

This was very cool and very creative Kim. Wow, I saw your contest...I need to think about this, what a challenge, but you make it look so easy.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/13/2017 4:09:00 PM

Thank you, Chris! Glad you enjoyed :)