Message In a Bottle

I’m watching my surroundings
And I don’t know what to do
The world is coming to an end
And I’m trying to warn you.

I’m writing you a message
Which I hope that you’ll receive
And on this parchment written well
I hope that you’ll perceive

The dangers of experiments,
Of waste and luxury,
This planet just cannot sustain
The lives of you and me.

I tried to send it via air
But the planes just will not fly;
They say the air is far too thin
That carbon is the sky.

So then I tried the mail on land
Encountering a quirk
Disease has stricken everywhere
And no one’s left to work.

Then sea it is, I’ll have it float
Within a bottle green,
But when I walked along the beach
There was no water to be seen.

I took it out and sat to think,
I’ll offer it by hand,
But when I reached to pick it up
It burnt into the sand.

I’d write another warning sign
But no pages in my hand,
I’d tell you using word of mouth –
Would you ever understand?

The air, polluted thick and through,
Disease from you to me,
The water’s gone and fires rage,
How can I make you see?

July 11,  2007

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 5/13/2016 12:20:00 PM
thank you for sharing, it's not easy when sending all the perfect notes, to he/she who've forgotten.... SKAT
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Date: 2/24/2016 9:57:00 PM
I forgot to comment on this one. I've always thought good poetry makes a statement with eloquence. I really enjoyed the statement in this one, and a true message! This is a fav for me! I really hope you continue writing :) -Dan
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Elaine Ho
Date: 2/27/2016 3:54:00 PM
Thank you Daniel, always a pleasure to read your posts :)
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