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Message In A Bottle

Ship wrecks do happen People get stranded On a small island Then build their shelters Make beds from what found Search for their food Then search for water Find a bottle and cap Find bark to write on Sending a message In a bottle to Anyone to find Hoping the bottle Will return to them The wait could be long Anyone to find Hoping the bottle Will return to them It could take months Months or years For the message to be found Or it could never be found Floating in water Unttil it is fpound

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Bill Baker

Date: 7/14/2025 6:16:00 PM

Nice Imagism poem, Darlene. We can cry out for help, but we can never know when it will arrive. Blessings my friend, from your poet friend in Texas, Bill

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/15/2025 10:59:00 AM

Hello Bill Baker, Your right, we will never know when we get help. Blessing my poet friend. /Darlene/

Sara Baker

Date: 7/14/2025 4:42:00 PM

the notion of messages in bottles have always intrigued me. You fueled that intrigue with your poem.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/15/2025 10:57:00 AM

Hello Sara Baker, I have been intrigued by the Message In The Bottle has also intrigued me. I fueled in my poem. Hugs. the intrigue. Hugs /Darlene/

Dr. Vandana Sharma

Date: 7/14/2025 11:25:00 AM

A new poetic form, for me! I think I will also try writing something in this poetic form. Great work!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/14/2025 11:34:00 AM

Hello Dr. Vandana, yes give this poetic form a try. Thank you my friend. /Darlene/Enjoy your day my friend.

Jay Narain

Date: 7/14/2025 10:21:00 AM

I will be lucky to find such a bottle floating in sea or river. It will convey a meaningful message. Thanks for poem.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/14/2025 10:47:00 AM

Hello Stranger, '[Jay{ How are you? Yes it would convey a meaningful message. i would like to find a message in bottle. Your welcome. blessings my friend. /Darlene/.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/14/2025 10:09:00 AM

Hello Deb M. i would like to find to. Yes it would be interesting. /Darlene/ x

Deb M

Date: 7/13/2025 8:01:00 PM

Absolutely true Darlene.....found or never to be found....l would love to find one.. it would be so interesting! Debx