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Mesmerizing Fall Days

I love brisk walks on breezy days; I’m mesmerized by fall's displays. Time’s limited. Cold weather stalks. On breezy days, I love brisk walks. from Highlights of Fall Written and posted June 8, 2020 entered in Joseph May's Swap the Verse Contest placed 2nd June 9, 2020, entered in Emile Pinet's Swap Quatrain Contest Placed 7th August 8, 2020 entered in the Rithimus Divisa 4 Contest Sponsor: Gregory Barden

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Date: 8/13/2020 9:53:00 AM
Good luck Janice, I am sure that Joseph will like it a lot! One feels invigorated after a brisk walk in cooler weather - great write Janice, Blessings, Jennifer.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/13/2020 10:50:00 AM
Thanks so much, Jennifer. Janice
Date: 8/9/2020 12:03:00 PM
Even better, climb to a mountain peak where the brisk wind can try to blow you off! Good luck in the contest! Aloha! Rico
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/9/2020 2:07:00 PM
Thanks, Rico. I'm afraid of heights. Janice
Date: 8/9/2020 11:39:00 AM
Nice penning Janice, indeed love a brisk walk on fall days as keeps one fresh and fit!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/9/2020 2:08:00 PM
Thanks so much, Gordon. Janice
Date: 8/9/2020 5:17:00 AM
Enjoyed the read of this winning stanza, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/9/2020 5:38:00 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay. Janice
Date: 8/9/2020 4:38:00 AM
I enjoyed this. I, too, love brisk walks on fall days. Bless you dear friend
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/9/2020 5:13:00 AM
Thanks so much, Regina. Janice
Date: 8/9/2020 4:02:00 AM
I like the quatrain you chose.. good luck in the contest..
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/9/2020 5:13:00 AM
Thanks so much, S.O. Janice
Date: 8/9/2020 3:15:00 AM
No better season for amazing colours Janice, and nothing beats a brisk walk to see them. Good luck Tom
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/9/2020 5:14:00 AM
Thanks so much, Tom. Janice
Date: 8/8/2020 8:12:00 PM
Hello Janice ... after summers warmth, autumn bounty awaits - thank you Janice - Lindsay
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/9/2020 5:15:00 AM
Thanks so much, Lindsay. Janice

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