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Mesmerising

I think we agree before we come, to know tweedle dee n tweedle dum, to spend some time together fit, and part n make a hash of it, the dumb times, always hurt a bit, its in the agreement rhyme.... lifes complicated an mesmerising , for those that think.... Don

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Date: 4/27/2012 6:34:00 AM
Ouch, not always easy when you can feel the world start to tilt! Complex "an mesmerising" thoughts, Don. Stay on an even keel, makes it easier to find your footing! Best wishes, Mikki
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Date: 4/26/2012 6:49:00 PM
I guess it is...Light and interesting view Don...Thanks... Love Diana
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Date: 4/26/2012 5:30:00 PM
I think so, too.. nice to readya, Don Johnson. Beauty eve to ya ~N
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