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Mesmeric Moon

Mesmeric Moon Welcome midnight sun Clouds bow away to your shine Magical mystical Moon Lovers look and stare As dreamers bathe in your light Mesmeric Moon melting hearts. Sedoka 5/7/7/5/7/7 Sept.06.2017 Moonlight Delight Sponsored by: Russell Sivey

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/10/2017 7:29:00 PM

Delightful. Congrats.

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 9/13/2017 10:46:00 PM

Gorgeous write, W2, and a wonderful image - blessings and congrats on your win! :-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/10/2017 8:30:00 PM

Congrats to YOU, W W!!

Probir Gupta

Date: 9/10/2017 1:04:00 AM

Indeed Mesmerizing ... Congratulations on your nice win ... Thanks for appreciating my placement in the contest too ...

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 9/9/2017 11:39:00 PM

Congratulation on your win, WW.

Eve Roper

Date: 9/9/2017 4:07:00 PM

^WW^, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/9/2017 2:13:00 PM

- Congratulations on your beautiful 5th place, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray

Date: 9/9/2017 12:01:00 PM

Mesmeric is the word for this winning entry WW.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/9/2017 10:18:00 AM

Absolutely magnificent, Winged Warrior, Congrats! Janice

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 9/9/2017 9:29:00 AM

Congratulations to you too on a great mesmerizing write W/W!~Che :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/9/2017 6:12:00 AM

Congrats WW!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/8/2017 9:15:00 PM

Truly a delight in this romantic one. That is where the sedoka led me as well. To romance!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/7/2017 8:56:00 PM

Who can look at that gorgeous full moon and not think of romance? A captivating Sedoka WW! : )

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/6/2017 2:53:00 PM

Romantically and magically delicious WW! Every line is gorgeous but you saved the best for last. Love the ending! Good luck in the contest! :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/6/2017 2:29:00 PM

Lovely and romantic and I like the alliteration :-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/6/2017 2:08:00 PM

- Beautiful and romantic in moonlight - Melted my heart :) - GL in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/6/2017 1:37:00 PM

Lovely tribute to moon's influence on love and life--good luck WW for the contest!

Silent One

Date: 9/6/2017 11:36:00 AM

Excellent last line.. how romantic to dance with a lover under the pale moonlight..

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/6/2017 11:21:00 AM

So very nice WW. I really enjoyed this! Good luck in the contest :)