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Merry Jane Doe

She knows when to smile but not her name 10/21/18 For Creative Conformity Contest Sponsored by John Lawless

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/22/2018 9:38:00 PM

Michelle F. said it better than I would have... :) gw

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/23/2018 9:36:00 AM

Thank you my friend :) xomo

Joe Dimino

Date: 10/22/2018 9:07:00 PM

A name, by itself, generally doesn't do much for me. But a smile...now that's always a winner. Great one, Maureen!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/23/2018 9:37:00 AM

Thank you Joe :) xomo!

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 10/22/2018 7:31:00 PM

Very cleverly expressed! ;)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/23/2018 9:37:00 AM

Thank you Rhona! :) xomo

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 10/22/2018 1:38:00 PM

Oh, mysterious, this one! Makes me think of the Mona Lisa-

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/23/2018 9:38:00 AM

Tee hee ;) Thank you Michelle! xomo

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/22/2018 7:58:00 AM

Good one Maureen! :) Creative and smart.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/22/2018 8:18:00 AM

Thank you Heidi :) xomo

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/22/2018 6:43:00 AM

I believe there is a deeper message in your words ..one that resonates. Clever, as always.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/22/2018 7:31:00 AM

Thank you Vijay, much appreciated. I captured what I wanted to say and tried to write more, even wrote another funny piece for this contest but came back to this one (cutting another word or two, lol) xomo

Arturo Michael

Date: 10/22/2018 6:21:00 AM

What is it?...joking...I only know mine when others call me...All the best Maureen

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/22/2018 7:27:00 AM

Chuckles ;) and you my friend, xomo