Merry and Bright

Christmas was only a few hours away.
Santa and elves were coming on the sleigh.
The night was filled with fair sights,
'Til the clash with festive lights.
Soon flashing, bright nosed Rudolph, led the way!


Written on 11/27/2022

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Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 11/30/2022 1:44:00 PM

Oh Evelyn, how cute and fun! I'm going to read it to my grandkids who have been studying poetry of late, they'll love it, I love it too, this an adorable poem!! :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/30/2022 8:47:00 PM

I'm very thrilled with your comments, BJ! It's so great to know you'll be sharing this poem with your grandchildren. Thank you for your lovely remarks. Evelyn :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/29/2022 12:26:00 PM

Colorful, playful and just plain charming Evelyn! Was always wondering where Rudolph got that nose so bright! Best wishes for the contest. Sending you bright blessings for the season.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/29/2022 8:54:00 PM

I'm thrilled that you enjoyed this limerick, Sam. Thank you so much for your kind expressions. A blessed season to you, as well, my friend.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/29/2022 5:34:00 AM

Perfect limerick.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/29/2022 12:19:00 PM

Thank you. :)

David Smith

Date: 11/28/2022 5:07:00 PM

Never get tired of the festive lights. Tours of places/streets with festive lights are a tradition here but not as many lights up as used to be, but still enough to enjoy, although less variety and use of imagination. I think Christmas poems give a lot of hope and have ability to lighten peoples mood. Glad I read yours, Evelyn.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/28/2022 11:26:00 PM

It's impossible to tire of such a lovely tradition, David. I love the Christmas lights, too. Thank you very much for your uplifting comments. Blessings