Merrily We Roll Along

lined up tall to small —
tailored suit on middle child.
Brady Bunch dress on sisters.
the Hammond organ,
put together by our dad —
the masterpiece behind us.

my mind’s eye opens
the bench, practice chart on keys,
wiggle of toes and fingers.
i flip old pages
with eyes closed. I see the song:
Merrily We Roll Along

we’re only self-taught.
the silly keys and chords squawk.
how i long to touch the past!
i’d find room for you,
with each grandchild cheering you,
near the sunlit window panes.

the Hammond organ
built by your great-grandfather —
the masterpiece behind you.
lined up tall to small,
i’d bless your fingers and toes
and let you find your own song.

4/30/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Dietrich Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 6:24 PM
this is stunning, Kim. I had a longer string of them too and did not realize I could enter that kind or I'd have submitted the longer one, which was truly my best. This is YOUR best, I can see!! Congrats.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 8:21 PM
Thank you, Andrea! :)
Andresen Avatar
June 10, 2019 at 1:12 PM
- Congratulations, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
June 10, 2019 at 6:44 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Romios Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 1:50 PM
Good luck, Kim! I am pulling for a win on another masterpiece. Panagiota
Rodrigues Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 1:57 PM
You’re so kind! Thank you!
Roper Avatar
May 2, 2019 at 7:29 PM
Kim, a masterpiece in this Sedoka verse . Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
Rodrigues Avatar
May 2, 2019 at 8:20 PM
Thank you, Eve! xx Kim
Andresen Avatar
May 2, 2019 at 3:11 AM
- Lovely memories, from happy moments Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 2, 2019 at 7:11 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! I had to close my eyes and see :) Hugs...Kim
Capitano Avatar
May 1, 2019 at 7:25 AM
Memories are made of life, the mundane and the sublime. Tiny moments that make up the sweetness, you found joy in the simple. Great story Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 1, 2019 at 7:46 AM
Thank you for your lovely comment, Phil! Hugs...Kim
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