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Merrily We Roll Along

lined up tall to small — tailored suit on middle child. Brady Bunch dress on sisters. the Hammond organ, put together by our dad — the masterpiece behind us. my mind’s eye opens the bench, practice chart on keys, wiggle of toes and fingers. i flip old pages with eyes closed. I see the song: Merrily We Roll Along we’re only self-taught. the silly keys and chords squawk. how i long to touch the past! i’d find room for you, with each grandchild cheering you, near the sunlit window panes. the Hammond organ built by your great-grandfather — the masterpiece behind you. lined up tall to small, i’d bless your fingers and toes and let you find your own song. 4/30/2019

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Date: 6/12/2019 6:24:00 PM
this is stunning, Kim. I had a longer string of them too and did not realize I could enter that kind or I'd have submitted the longer one, which was truly my best. This is YOUR best, I can see!! Congrats.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/12/2019 8:21:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! :)
Date: 6/10/2019 1:12:00 PM
- Congratulations, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/10/2019 6:44:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 5/3/2019 1:50:00 PM
Good luck, Kim! I am pulling for a win on another masterpiece. Panagiota
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/3/2019 1:57:00 PM
You’re so kind! Thank you!
Date: 5/2/2019 7:29:00 PM
Kim, a masterpiece in this Sedoka verse . Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/2/2019 8:20:00 PM
Thank you, Eve! xx Kim
Date: 5/2/2019 3:11:00 AM
- Lovely memories, from happy moments Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/2/2019 7:11:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! I had to close my eyes and see :) Hugs...Kim
Date: 5/1/2019 7:25:00 AM
Memories are made of life, the mundane and the sublime. Tiny moments that make up the sweetness, you found joy in the simple. Great story Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/1/2019 7:46:00 AM
Thank you for your lovely comment, Phil! Hugs...Kim

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