Merrily We Roll Along

lined up tall to small —
tailored suit on middle child.
Brady Bunch dress on sisters.
the Hammond organ,
put together by our dad —
the masterpiece behind us.

my mind’s eye opens
the bench, practice chart on keys,
wiggle of toes and fingers.
i flip old pages
with eyes closed. I see the song:
Merrily We Roll Along

we’re only self-taught.
the silly keys and chords squawk.
how i long to touch the past!
i’d find room for you,
with each grandchild cheering you,
near the sunlit window panes.

the Hammond organ
built by your great-grandfather —
the masterpiece behind you.
lined up tall to small,
i’d bless your fingers and toes
and let you find your own song.

4/30/2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 6/12/2019 6:24:00 PM
this is stunning, Kim. I had a longer string of them too and did not realize I could enter that kind or I'd have submitted the longer one, which was truly my best. This is YOUR best, I can see!! Congrats.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/12/2019 8:21:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! :)
Date: 6/10/2019 1:12:00 PM
- Congratulations, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/10/2019 6:44:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 5/3/2019 1:50:00 PM
Good luck, Kim! I am pulling for a win on another masterpiece. Panagiota
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/3/2019 1:57:00 PM
You’re so kind! Thank you!
Date: 5/2/2019 7:29:00 PM
Kim, a masterpiece in this Sedoka verse . Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/2/2019 8:20:00 PM
Thank you, Eve! xx Kim
Date: 5/2/2019 3:11:00 AM
- Lovely memories, from happy moments Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/2/2019 7:11:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! I had to close my eyes and see :) Hugs...Kim
Date: 5/1/2019 7:25:00 AM
Memories are made of life, the mundane and the sublime. Tiny moments that make up the sweetness, you found joy in the simple. Great story Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/1/2019 7:46:00 AM
Thank you for your lovely comment, Phil! Hugs...Kim
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