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MERMAIDS' OMEN



There once were mermaids hailing from Crete
The Aegean Sea they'd rule so sweet
        They'd enchant with their chant
        Dull the rant when heard "can't"
For them not a match was Hercules' fleet

The sea'd get wild and tumultuous
The men unruly rambunctious
        With strength superhuman
        Hercules 'gainst omen
Down went the men not so virtuous



Submitted on July 27, 2019, for contest TWO SEA THEMED LIMERICKS sponsored by TANIA KITCHIN

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Date: 7/30/2019 9:48:00 PM
Good one, good luck!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/31/2019 3:36:00 AM
Thanks, Timothy.
Date: 7/28/2019 4:45:00 PM
wonderful write Line, I love both the sea and mythical mermaids so this one came to life nicely! :) hugs
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/28/2019 8:54:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sandra. Most appreciated.
Date: 7/28/2019 2:37:00 PM
Well done, Line! Janice
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/28/2019 4:14:00 PM
Thanks, Janice. Much appreciated.
Date: 7/28/2019 7:47:00 AM
What a fun limerick for the contest! I am sure to see this one in the winner's box!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/28/2019 7:50:00 AM
Thanks for the vote of confidence, Caren.
Date: 7/27/2019 5:51:00 PM
Line!! You are excelkent at more than Haikus. Keep your golden, glowing, pen at work. Such talent! A FAV. Three cheers, Those are not only brilliant but great fun. You go, girl! Panagiota xx
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/27/2019 6:41:00 PM
Thank you so much for your glowing review, Panagiota. Most appreciated.
Date: 7/27/2019 5:43:00 PM
Hi Line, This is a good one for the contest theme. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/27/2019 6:40:00 PM
Thank you so much, Alexis. Most appreciated.