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Mermaid Melody

I was submerged in an ocean of rants, hiding the sparkles of my poetic planktons. My meaningless phrases that meant everything, but nothing and anything at the same time. Yet I found mermaid melodies from idyllic waves, placed with love in my heart, by a mystical angel worlds apart, that felt like home in so many forms, when bitter reality was crashing and thrashing, my bones with no mercy or empathy. Although twin flames reignited lost romance, against every tide of redolent rhymes and measured meters, as couplets destined to be sweethearts. In a world of untold words and expressions, we scribbled sensual senryu, and silver sonnets, along lilac lines of lavender shadows where ebony fingers intertwined to devise, cryptic potions of pearlescent personifications, and harlequin haiku as well as ethereal etherees, where hourglass nonets bleed amethyst alliterations, forever composing floral choruses whilst healing through free verse with strawberry musings, on a sandbank where islanders rendered ravishing runes, dripping on chocolate reveries, about soulmates that sheltered their love in an oyster shell.

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Date: 1/7/2024 6:59:00 AM
Such a memorable ending to your exceptional poem. "Love in an oyster shell" - power punch image as are so many of your word couplings. "Strawberry musings," chocolate reveries," "silver sonnets" - all contribute to the poetic resonance of your poem. The structure of the piece is top notch too. Congratulations! Brian
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Date: 1/5/2024 2:01:00 AM
Simply beautiful and brilliant!
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Date: 1/3/2024 6:06:00 PM
Dear Empress, my heart's imagination is swept up and away in a poetic whirl of lyrical enchantment and "mermaid melodies". Your exquisite poem is full of lustrous pearls of imagery, emotions, alliterations and word phrases like "poetic planktons" and "ravishing runes" and "where where hourglass nonets bleed" but my absolute fav verse was "soulmates that sheltered their love in an oyster shell" - magnifique dear gifted poetess! Congratulations for your win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes my soulful friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 1/3/2024 2:44:00 AM
So beautiful dear... There is comfort from the gray sky... Congratulations... You made it again...
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Ink Empress
Date: 1/3/2024 6:01:00 AM
Awn thank you so much truly for your kindness and generous support truly i am grateful
Date: 1/3/2024 12:24:00 AM
Again and again I stay in wonder and awe of your immense potentialities as a poet. So much enthralled to read everyone of your poems ! The images you draw are exquisite ! The poetic forms you have mentioned give a rare sheen to your poem. Your phrases are so full of meaning. Your poems are sweethearts creating a desire to be with them and to go deep into their inexhaustible beauty and charm. You are indeed a mermaid, a rare gift and blessing. Congratulations on your great win, dear Empress.
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Ink Empress
Date: 1/3/2024 6:04:00 AM
You always make me feel special and good enough sweet soul. I appreciate your support so very much always. Thank you so very much for all your kindness. Your poetic presence means so much to me
Date: 1/2/2024 10:58:00 PM
This is such a cleverly crafted poem, so full of beautiful island imagery. I see it did well in a competition, no surprise, so congratulations dear Inky ...lots of love
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Date: 1/3/2024 6:34:00 AM
Sweet maria, i appreciate you so much, your well wishes and birthday comments and also your feedback, i hope you know how grateful i am for your poetic presence and soulful light. Hope this year brings you all that your heart desires
Date: 1/2/2024 9:05:00 PM
This is beautiful. It takes me to the ocean shore where I hear the crashing waves. It is romantically enduring.
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Date: 1/3/2024 6:36:00 AM
Awwn thank you kind hilda, i appreciate you so very much always truly
Date: 1/2/2024 6:12:00 PM
Exquisite poetry as always, with excellent metaphors, images and all. I've extremely enjoyed reading your poem today my dearest poet friend Ink. Loving this so much and I'm always grateful & delighted to read your work. Thank you so much. Thank you so much as well for your loving support and wishes for the new year. Happy and Prosperous New Year too, to you and your family. I wish you all the BEST that life will bring this New Year 2024. May God bless you always. Hugs
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Date: 1/3/2024 6:42:00 AM
Awwn you always come with so much light to sprinkle across my poetic skies. Thank you so much for making me feel like my poems are good enough. I appreciate you so much dear len
Date: 1/2/2024 2:40:00 PM
Congrats on your placement! You deserve nothing less. <3
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Ink Empress
Date: 1/3/2024 6:46:00 AM
Awwn sweet paige you are truly a poetic blessing
Date: 1/2/2024 11:10:00 AM
I knew this one would do well dear empress.. Congratulations on your placement..
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Ink Empress
Date: 1/3/2024 6:58:00 AM
Awwn thats so sweet of you to say thank you king of silence
Date: 1/2/2024 10:15:00 AM
"My meaningless phrases that meant everything, but nothing and anything at the same time" this was a profound line in opening stanza.. you aced once again with your brilliant metaphors and amazing alliterations dear Ink! Never failed to amaze us.. brilliantly expressed! Loved it dear!
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Date: 1/3/2024 7:04:00 AM
I appreciate your kindness always , thank you so much for showing your support. Sending you light always
Date: 1/2/2024 8:59:00 AM
I like yoir use of alliteration in this mermaid verse, Very nIcely done
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Ink Empress
Date: 1/3/2024 7:04:00 AM
Thank you so much dear Joseph, truly grateful always
Date: 1/2/2024 7:37:00 AM
Your poetry is very heavenly, dear Ink because it is full of metaphors and beautiful imagery that you have expertly chosen. It is simply astonishing how well you grasp the language and how elegantly you use it. Your mastery of multiple poetry styles is simply astounding; they all work together to create a spellbinding masterpiece. My deepest congrats for your well-earned contest win.
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Date: 1/3/2024 7:05:00 AM
Ah dear sotto, I appreciate your kindness always thank you so very much for being so supportive, im grateful
Date: 1/2/2024 6:58:00 AM
You really paint quite a picture with your use of these words my friend. So many emotions come through. Well done. A fine write and wonderful contest entry. God Bless and Happy New Year, JB
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Ink Empress
Date: 1/3/2024 7:09:00 AM
Ah thank you for your kind and generous feedback as well as your new year wishes. So very kind of you, grateful for your poetic presence truly
Date: 1/2/2024 6:06:00 AM
Perfectly woven words exude melodies as you take the reader through your poetic prowess, my friend. Quite original how you have used so many poetic forms to paint your canvas: we scribbled sensual senryu, and silver sonnets, along lilac lines of lavender shadows--cryptic potions of pearlescent personifications, and harlequin haiku as well as ethereal etherees, where hourglass nonets--WOW! A definite FAVE!!
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Date: 1/3/2024 7:11:00 AM
Dear Vijay, your feedback as always is so very sincere and kind. And so uplifting. Im always grateful for your poetic presence; thank you so much for the fave too, grateful truly always
Date: 1/2/2024 5:19:00 AM
dearest Ink--I enjoyed the mermaid metaphor--a sparkling creature submerged in the ocean of rants while hiding the sparkles of poetic planktons. I felt a range of emotions through your imagery and your creative use of poetic terms (harlequin haiku as well as ethereal etherees, where hourglass nonets bleed amethyst alliterations) This is a brilliant masterpiece that wowed me from the start. What a fabulous contest entry....best wishes with the contest . Wishing you a beautiful 2024. Hugs,Sara
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Date: 1/3/2024 7:21:00 AM
Awwn thank you sweet sara, you are so kind and generous, i am truly grateful for all your kind support. Thank you so very much. I wish you a beautiful 2024 too. Sending you light always
Date: 1/2/2024 4:37:00 AM
My dear Ink Empress,you truly know how to enchant my heart with these oceanic imageries as I too, have a mermaid heart with an utmost desire of being a mermaid, but with wings haha.This one's such a beautifully romantic and heartfelt write where you've so gorgeously conveyed how your soul filled with a lavender light, when the beloved, hued your life with ecstasy.I'm loving the marine theme here as well as the poetic combinations in the last stanza which stroll in vivid forms n devices of poetry
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 1/2/2024 4:44:00 AM
hiding the sparkles of my poetic planktons", "crashing and thrashing my bones with no mercy or empathy" That's so evocative.."along lilac lines of lavender", "shadows that sheltered their love in an oyster shell" Gosh, that ending is so purely an art.. What an enchanting and mesmeric piece this is.. An instant FAV :) keep writing and shining always.. Sending love & light ~
Date: 1/2/2024 3:29:00 AM
This is a great entry for Brian Strands;s contest.. beautifully captures the depth and complexity of emotions, using vivid imagery of poetic forms. The metaphor of being submerged in an ocean of rants while hiding the sparkles of poetic planktons is particularly striking, suggesting a struggle to maintain the essence of creativity amid the chaos of life... The juxtaposition of "meaningless phrases that meant everything, but nothing and anything at the same time" adds a layer of ambiguity,
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Date: 1/3/2024 7:55:00 AM
Wow your comment is way better than my poem and you really do understand the depth of my words always truly im grateful for your support always silent one thank you for being so supportive your poetic presence is truly an inspiration
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Date: 1/2/2024 3:31:00 AM
reflecting the inherent paradox in the power of language. The emergence of "mermaid melodies" and the mention of a "mystical angel" introduces a sense of divine intervention or inspiration, providing solace in the face of harsh realities... The concluding image of "soulmates that sheltered their love in an oyster shell" is both unique and evocative, symbolizing the delicate yet protective nature of profound connections amidst the unpredictable sea of life.. Your poem is a testament to the transformative power of poetry, weaving together diverse elements to create a captivating narrative.
Date: 1/2/2024 1:38:00 AM
I'm back hopefully for a long time. I love mermaids. Lovely poem.
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Ink Empress
Date: 1/3/2024 7:42:00 AM
Welcome back victor. So good to see you back again
Date: 1/2/2024 12:37:00 AM
Beautiful as always .
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Date: 1/1/2024 11:52:00 PM
Your title drew me in and the wonderful word choices keep me! Brilliant alliteration and interesting engaging subject. What a refreshing unique piece of art!
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Ink Empress
Date: 1/3/2024 7:38:00 AM
Awwn thank you for your wishes and also for appreciating my poems i truly am grateful for all your kindness truly
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Karen Jones
Date: 1/2/2024 8:30:00 PM
Happy belated birthday by the way!
Date: 1/1/2024 11:09:00 PM
I thought this very heartfelt. You truly appeal to my Humanity- which is why you're one of my favorite writers (poets). May your honesty and raw gift never end. <3
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Date: 1/3/2024 7:54:00 AM
Awen you are such a kind and sweet soul thank you so much always
Date: 1/1/2024 11:09:00 PM
I thought this very heartfelt. You truly appeal to my Humanity- which is why you're one of my favorite writers (poets). May your honesty and raw gift never end. <3
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Date: 1/1/2024 10:26:00 PM
Ooo this opening line.. submerged in an ocean of rants,hiding the sparkles of my poetic planktons…love it! reignited lost romance, against every tide.. world of untold words and expressions, we scribbled sensual senryu, and silver sonnets, along lilac lines of lavender shadows.. mmmm love!!! Wonder wat thats like… um so empty in life XD.. soulmates that sheltered their love in an oyster shell… I barely have a shell for my oyster aee!! Haha… beautiful piece.. the elements of poetry is gorgeous!!!
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