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Mermaid

we met in glass jars
on the Beagle in the Pacific
I'd never seen anything
like you before, your hair, your smile, 
your huggable eyes, thrown together
by beards and tankards
grabbed from every sun, but
you reflected curves onto my glass
and maimed my stopper for oceans
now we sit on different shelves
but I can still hear you sing
in the darkened storages
and that's more or less
how it was between us
for hundreds 
if not thousands
of years

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Date: 10/1/2023 8:36:00 AM
This is absolutely stunning! Loved it! Mermaid that title brought me here and i must say the way you’ve written in a descriptive flow is captivating and very soulfully poetic. Enjoyed reading this narrative
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 10/1/2023 8:56:00 AM
Thank you very much, I'm so pleased you liked it. The idea was to suggest that over eons of time, many lifetimes, hopefully they won't all be the same and we can escape our glass jars as we go through time.

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