Merger of Our Caress

You are my flower
Sting me like a bumble bee
Reaching far within
In front I can clearly see
The merger of our caress

Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Pettit Avatar
December 23, 2011 at 9:55 PM
A fine example of a tanka poem.
Nutter Avatar
December 23, 2011 at 7:21 PM
Nice write.
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