Mere Straw

He stands in the middle of this year's crop;
a body of straw, stuffed into the clothes
of a beggar-man.
In the field's center, arms stretched wide,
with the implied discipline
of deterring robber birds; birds that mocked the wires,
strung with strips of cloth.
He has no conspiracy with winds; just stares
into the distance, seeing in lucid moments
the changing skyline; scaffolding around the church spire,
the lovely patch of green in the center of town
Involved in the convolutions of clouds, anything
that can bouy his spirits

Brian's Choice G, any form, any theme Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Brian Strand
Third Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 6/4/2021 9:05:00 PM
What a lovely tribute ~ wonderful poem
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Date: 5/17/2020 6:00:00 AM
Beautiful write - congratulations on your well-deserved win in Brian's contest, Suzanne - best wishes and keep the ink flowing, my friend! ~ the bard
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 5/17/2020 6:45:00 AM
Thanks so much,Greg: Nice to have your visit and friendship. Best, SuZ
Date: 6/18/2013 12:35:00 AM
A wonderful tribute to a scarecrow, SuZ. Reminds me of the words of a poet (Milton?) of those who serve while waiting... Greetings, David
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Date: 6/15/2013 7:15:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this very descriptive work..Those scarecrows have their own personality don't they..Thanks for the visit to Gail's blog..I appreciate your condolences...Sara
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