Mere Creature That I Am

My lady and her unborn child I'd borne to this small town, where door to door they went in search of some place they might stay till morn. At last, to this small stable they were sent. Though worried, they were very good to me. My lady was in pain. I heard her moan while Joseph knelt beside her tenderly to wipe her brow; a star above them shone. I looked up and could see it getting bright, then brighter when she gave birth to her son! Some shepherds came; it was a wondrous sight. I heard them say He was the chosen one of whom the angels sang in skies above! Mere creature that I am, I felt pure love. (I am the donkey, by the way, in case I needed to name the animal!) Written November 2015 for the Christmas With Christ Poetry Contest of Isaiah Zerbst

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Date: 11/29/2015 1:02:00 PM
"Bring the little children unto me," also that blessed donkey. Written by an animal lover, I can tell. Love, daver
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Date: 11/24/2015 9:55:00 PM
How sweet this is Andrea. Is it for the contest? I will miss you too. Have a lovely Thanksgiving! Hugs, Connie
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Date: 11/24/2015 9:06:00 PM
Lovely Andrea
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Date: 11/24/2015 7:29:00 PM
You are really good at writing sonnets Andrea, and this one through the eyes of a donkey is something special as is the meaning - Lindsay
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Date: 11/24/2015 1:51:00 AM
Beautiful, Andrea, and very clever! It took me till about the fifth line to realize you were the donkey...lol. Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 11/23/2015 3:18:00 PM
Love it Andrea...Is this from the perspective of the donkey?
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Date: 11/23/2015 5:32:00 PM
yes, Tim. of course I am the donkey. You should have seen the last line i had on this one before I decided it might not go over too well with the judge: Although I'm just an ASS I felt pure love. hahaha
Date: 11/23/2015 12:10:00 PM
very beautiful dedication to the world's most loved,courageous and wise man.Amen. brilliantly pulled Andrea.
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Date: 11/23/2015 11:20:00 AM
I can feel that pure love dear Andrea..Indeed the chosen one. ..Amen
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