Get Your Premium Membership

MERE CHRISTIANITY Minichu

Christ a phantom through my hours flames within a kohl tongue psalms crack the white cloth like a razor On the way back piercing kneeling knees, a broken crown's mask glistening kindling memory Christ a phantom through my hours piercing kneeling knees — memory

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/12/2025 10:05:00 AM
Profoundly beautiful! A well canvasing write. One. Peace and Love.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/5/2025 7:38:00 PM
You sure have a way with Minichu. Some great imagery for Christ's suffering in that second verse.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/5/2025 6:03:00 PM
Enhancing the suffering of the savior…sounds quite painful.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/4/2025 12:34:00 PM
a moving piece on a Savior's challenge as a human being...you bring life to this minichu, paige...happy 2025 !
Login to Reply
Date: 1/3/2025 10:17:00 PM
so touching words and ideas for poetry, this is wonderful indeed, thanks poet
Login to Reply
Date: 1/3/2025 8:31:00 PM
Very Exquisitely penned Minishu dear Paige. You really become an expert in crafting this form. Best wishes for a very happy new year
Login to Reply
Date: 1/3/2025 6:42:00 PM
"Christ a phantom through my hours" - A very beautiful minichu.
Login to Reply

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry