Mercury, Mars, and the Moon

Mercury speeds through galactic showers
  Others take days, her journey's three hours
Although it's said she has superpowers
  Behind Space grains and particles, Mercury cowers

Mars sells creamy, caramel chocolate bars
  Leads the life of a Milky Way star
Travels here, travels there, near and far
  Always seeks Peace, finds only War ~

Which leaves us the Moon, to rescue us soon
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
August 16, 2021 at 12:05 PM
Mars and Milky Way -both tasty candy bars that make me smile. Thanks for this delicious delivery.
Faulkner Avatar
August 13, 2021 at 11:37 AM
Now all I can think about are those yummy Milky Way bars :)
Wolf Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 8:02 PM
Yup, they are certainly yummy! ~ gw
Ibeh Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 10:52 AM
Nice, funny one, Gershon!-) This brought a smile to my face!
Wolf Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 8:02 PM
Thanks Edward! ~ gw
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