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Mercury, Mars, and the Moon

Mercury speeds through galactic showers Others take days, her journey's three hours Although it's said she has superpowers Behind Space grains and particles, Mercury cowers Mars sells creamy, caramel chocolate bars Leads the life of a Milky Way star Travels here, travels there, near and far Always seeks Peace, finds only War ~ Which leaves us the Moon, to rescue us soon

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Date: 8/16/2021 12:05:00 PM
Mars and Milky Way -both tasty candy bars that make me smile. Thanks for this delicious delivery.
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Date: 8/13/2021 11:37:00 AM
Now all I can think about are those yummy Milky Way bars :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/14/2021 8:02:00 PM
Yup, they are certainly yummy! ~ gw
Date: 8/12/2021 10:52:00 AM
Nice, funny one, Gershon!-) This brought a smile to my face!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/14/2021 8:02:00 PM
Thanks Edward! ~ gw

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