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Mercury

He walks into the room like liquid mercury Deadly yet mesmurizing to the eyes He molds into every woman he touches She will ever feel his smooth maleness He seems to be placing orders for the night Who will get to grace his bed of pleasures? Tomorrow he slithers away like the spineless disease he really is; life shatters around his wake.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/30/2010 11:15:00 AM
Great write that is so true of some men...Enjoyed your work..Ashley hasn't been down today..She was here yesterday nearly all day or afternoon..Mom
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Date: 9/29/2010 12:43:00 PM
A lovely mesmerising piece it makes me feel good as a man - I'd better wind and slither away ! But you girls are better at it than us - well the mesmerising bit anyway !
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Date: 9/29/2010 12:00:00 PM
A true gem of a poem, doris. much enjoyed!
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Date: 9/29/2010 11:28:00 AM
thank you i really appreciate your comments
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Date: 9/29/2010 11:01:00 AM
divine great poem
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Date: 9/29/2010 8:47:00 AM
Oh, Doris, I have met some people who "slither away" as well. Deception is their art and once their thirst is quenched, they leave with no concern for those they have hurt. Your poem and you go to my favorites today before I make my big move. Thanks for all your support in these past months. Love, Carolyn
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