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Mental Fog

This bedlam! The sinkhole atop my corpse! Derelict; God too refused to Love me! Hope becoming less. Dying as it warps. Despair; that too seems to be above me. Lost between fringes of my psychosis. Remnants of a beautiful shattered mind. Every fragment seely upon notice. My struggle with the self that I can’t find. My chaperone of double mindedness leads the way; trending along a bevel. Hopes leverage against death’s entry test despite being designed by the devil. Resolution lost within dialogue. My illusion diagnosed: Mental Fog.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 7/6/2019 11:09:00 PM
You’ve woven the required words with seamless ease into the compelling fabric of your poem, Dill. An amazing piece. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Dill Dennison
Date: 7/7/2019 12:47:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 7/2/2019 4:47:00 PM
Well done, Dill. Congrats on your well deserved win, Dill.
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Dill Dennison
Date: 7/7/2019 12:47:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 7/2/2019 4:28:00 AM
Mental fog indeed. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Kind wishes, Kai
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Dill Dennison
Date: 7/7/2019 12:44:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 6/1/2019 7:25:00 PM
Well done Dill, amazing sonnet! I would never know this was compose with 8 compulsory words, it flowed seamlessly. I see congrats are in order...very deserving winner!
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Dill Dennison
Date: 6/1/2019 9:55:00 PM
Thank You
Date: 6/1/2019 6:00:00 PM
This is brilliantly composed Dill! Congratulations on your deserving high placement! It is very nice to meet you. Aloha, Connie : )
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Dill Dennison
Date: 6/1/2019 9:54:00 PM
Thank You!