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Mental Breakout

Walking down a street alone a few things come across me surrounding gardens all acquired perfectly flowers blooming happy dog running smiling people with no heads all friendly. Much distance behind me now where I fairly took my leap of freedom they must be wondering where I am now. So better pick up the pace sanity of the world is appealing to me much reasons to be walking cheerfully. But the fresh air does seems dirty flowers now seem dead dogs looking more aggressive people with no heads are not around any-more. NOW I SEE THE TRUTH!!! I'm scared! What can I do to getaway from this insane world? Can't go back drugs are to weak for me better start running run to that world where sanity was my pleasurable freedom run away to that world where all seems to be clear through the fog Get to that world where people smile again with no heads!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/16/2011 8:35:00 PM
A dark write Ryan on the depths of mental anguish for those who are lost in it. I relate!
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Date: 9/5/2011 4:15:00 PM
Wonderful write Ryan to which I can so well relate world sometimes is a nasty place.
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Date: 9/1/2011 5:12:00 PM
wow...great poem
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Date: 9/1/2011 2:14:00 PM
i like this.nice write up
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