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Men No Pause

I'm a very patient woman, but it seems most men no pause They want to taste the wedding cake on the first date They want to eat it all I try to tell them it takes patience to form a special bond Creating a loving relationship: you don't guzzle, you sip and just savor it Let it settle in your heart for a while Press pause ... you might even enjoy rewinding it a bit A bed of love must be prepared first, and it takes time Laying a solid foundation down requires doing some groundwork So sit ... and just talk Don't try to rush this Them men no pause, be in a heated hurry to get a quick pleasure fix They not down with ever getting lovesick Feeling feverish ... they don't wanna have to wait for that marriage healing balm Sacred vows held by joined palms Men no pause ain't nothing but a hot flash that won't last Recognizing this instantly, gets them tossed back in the water quickly But I know there are some rare fishes in the sea, still swimming free ... who are spiritually older than me And have waited even more patiently Their sunset glows brilliantly with golden rays of sunshine Wisdom gleaned in life, aged like fine wine

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Date: 2/2/2017 10:00:00 PM
Fabulous poem Freddie. Love it. :) mo!
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Date: 2/1/2017 7:22:00 PM
It was always about the HUNT when I was young, RW! If the hunt was too easy, it wouldn't last a week! But you are correct, patience is a must in all aspects of our lives! And I enjoyed the play on words, Men o pause! Haha, Very funny! Love your work Bro!
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