Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

- Men - Cars - Women -

If you see
   a man opens
     the car door 
       for a woman ....
         He certainly has
           a brand new car ...
            or a very young
             and beautiful mistress
               His pride ...
                a conquest ... 
                  the gleaming varnish
                    reminds him of
                     sensual red woman lips
                      Excite shining
                       in his eyes - 
                        you will always
                          be his number two




13.01.2014
A-L Andresen :))

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Farhana Akter May 16, 2014 at 4:34 PM so true , dear Anne-Lise Andresen May 17, 2014 at 6:03 AM - Thanks for the nice visit, Farhana ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Darren Watson February 2, 2014 at 12:57 PM I renew my BMW every 3 years. If I were married , Would I renew my wife similarly? A very enjoyable read though. Anne-Lise Andresen February 2, 2014 at 2:36 PM - I hope not :) - Thanks for the nice visit, Darren. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kathryn Collins February 1, 2014 at 9:01 AM Anne Lise - How great those Ferrari's art! Absolutely enjoyable. Hit the spot. love, Kathy Anne-Lise Andresen February 1, 2014 at 9:28 AM - Glad you liked my little smile :) - "- Men - Cars - Women -", Kathryn !!! Thanks for the nice visit. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso January 31, 2014 at 10:07 PM Another very creative write that has me smiling, sadly I have an old car, but I can say I open the door for others, just seems the right thing to do!!!! :) And my car is so old, opening the door for someone is the highlight, all down hill from there! Anne-Lise Andresen February 1, 2014 at 6:23 AM - Glad you liked my little smile :) - "- Men - Cars - Women -", Arthur !!! Thanks for the nice visit. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joe Maverick January 30, 2014 at 4:11 PM Hello Anne Lise, good reading here I haven't had a red car...or for that matter a 'scarlet woman' for many old years.. L O L, however enjoyed the write, and thank you for the remarks on the Lina-Marie poem I did.. Joe. Anne-Lise Andresen January 30, 2014 at 6:22 PM Glad you liked my little smile :) - "- Men - Cars - Women -", Joe !!! Thanks for the nice visit. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

The Situation January 29, 2014 at 3:54 AM If only the woman could be as faithful as the car. Anne-Lise Andresen January 29, 2014 at 4:03 AM - In true love they are :))) - Thanks for the nice visit, T.S. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Rogers January 28, 2014 at 12:24 AM OUCH, Anne-Lise!-LOL Believe it or not sweetie, "there are a few "Real Gentlemen" Antiques, still around from the good ole' days! smile Hahahahaha,,,Very Nice Work! xoxoxoxo Robert OBTW,,,nice form and construct of this piece. Anne-Lise Andresen January 28, 2014 at 2:53 AM - Yes, men are different ..... as it is with women...:)) - Glad you liked my little smile :) - "- Men - Cars - Women -", Robert !!! Thanks for the nice visit. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Tim B January 23, 2014 at 2:43 PM Too many people who are like this, the ego and the selfish nature of man is often his undoing, or hers in many cases these days. Great poem Anne. Anne-Lise Andresen January 23, 2014 at 2:46 PM - So true, Tim... well said :)) - Glad you liked my little smile :) - "- Men - Cars - Women -" !!! Thanks for the nice visit. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Michael Dom January 22, 2014 at 3:23 AM ha, ha. yes, the male ego does take some casualties. Anne-Lise Andresen January 22, 2014 at 3:25 AM Glad you liked my little smile :) - "- Men - Cars - Women -", Michael !!! Thanks for the nice visit. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Carol Eastman January 20, 2014 at 9:20 AM Loved you poem... But for my Hubby it's a brand new computer and new hobby sites to go to... LOL Anne-Lise Andresen January 20, 2014 at 2:03 PM Glad you liked my little smile :) - "- Men - Cars - Women -", Carol !!! Thanks for the nice visit. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ralph Mason January 19, 2014 at 4:32 PM Ha ha enjoyed your poem. Should I stop opening doors for women? Warm thoughts, Ralph Anne-Lise Andresen January 19, 2014 at 4:35 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and comment Ralph. - your words are encouraging and supportive :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dominique Johnson January 19, 2014 at 3:31 PM Generally nothing beats a new car, but a woman will always give great competition! Anne-Lise Andresen January 19, 2014 at 3:43 PM - Thanks for the nice visit, Dominique. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock January 19, 2014 at 1:47 PM Ha ha ha had me smiling with this poem. A man and his car is tough competition for a woman. Have a nice weekend. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen January 19, 2014 at 2:00 PM Glad you liked my little smile :) - "- Men - Cars - Women -", Phyllis !!! Thanks for the nice visit. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kira Price January 19, 2014 at 11:52 AM Men and their toys!! lol Anne-Lise Andresen January 19, 2014 at 12:06 PM Yes .... toys :)) - Thanks for the nice visit, Kira. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith January 19, 2014 at 11:23 AM This piece so rings true of many men. If they only knew that their toys will lose luster but the woman will continue to shine. Tim Anne-Lise Andresen January 19, 2014 at 11:45 AM - So true, Tim... well said :)) - Glad you liked my little smile :) - "- Men - Cars - Women -" !!! Thanks for the nice visit. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud January 17, 2014 at 7:46 AM ohh, toys for the big boys--except women.. how's your day, anne?... huggs Anne-Lise Andresen January 17, 2014 at 7:50 AM - Thank you, Nette // Anne-Lise :)

Chuck Melugin January 16, 2014 at 5:57 PM Anne-Lise I loved it but: You....sure ain't no number two! hugs, chuck Anne-Lise Andresen January 17, 2014 at 2:32 AM Glad you liked my little smile :) - "- Men - Cars - Women -", Chuck !!! Thanks for the nice visit. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Horne January 16, 2014 at 4:12 PM lol,, witty write, my friend : ) Anne-Lise Andresen January 17, 2014 at 2:32 AM Glad you liked my little smile :) - "- Men - Cars - Women -", Jack !!! Thanks for the nice visit. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

James Wilson January 16, 2014 at 2:11 PM I like the way it is written Anne-Lise Andresen January 17, 2014 at 2:31 AM - Thanks for the nice visit, James. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Peter Dome January 16, 2014 at 12:54 PM There maybe a lot of truth in this unique write, But for me, It's the woman first. Although, we might have the car, but not always have the woman. I love the style and delivery. well done. best wishes. Pete. Anne-Lise Andresen January 16, 2014 at 1:03 PM Glad you liked my little smile :) - "- Men - Cars - Women -", Peter !!! Thanks for the nice visit. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Bennett January 16, 2014 at 8:38 AM Very very true! I enjoyed reading it. Thanks again for stopping by my page. Anne-Lise Andresen January 16, 2014 at 8:50 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comment Alexis - your words are encouraging and supportive :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud January 15, 2014 at 7:59 PM yes, again, anne... this kind of ride drives him crazy more than any woman could... hello, thursday!.. huggs Anne-Lise Andresen January 16, 2014 at 4:06 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comment Nette - your words are encouraging and supportive :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Michael Byte January 15, 2014 at 5:08 PM Very cute poem I enjoyed it very much xoxo Michael Anne-Lise Andresen January 16, 2014 at 4:05 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comment Michael - your words are encouraging and supportive :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Austin Eseke January 15, 2014 at 2:06 PM nice poem indeed,thanks for your visit,bye for now. Anne-Lise Andresen January 15, 2014 at 2:13 PM - Thanks for the nice visit, Austin. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jancarl Campi January 15, 2014 at 11:35 AM Quite a poem. We guys sure do some strange things don't we? Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us. Jancarl Anne-Lise Andresen January 15, 2014 at 11:39 AM - Fortunately, men are different ..... as it is with women...:)) - Glad you liked my little smile :) - "- Men - Cars - Women -", Jancarl !!! Thanks for the nice visit. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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