Memory - Sunrise

What's Your Memory of Nature 5-18-26
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Memory - Sunrise

Touched by the breath of coral dawn
Morning paints stars in amber hues
Gossamer streaks like pink chiffon
Sing a love poem - my heart renewed.
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Lane Avatar
June 9, 2026 at 10:52 AM
Your entry was on the beauty of sunrise as well... and much better written than some of the top entries, Sam. I'd have placed yours much higher.
George Avatar
June 8, 2026 at 9:49 PM
Sorry to see that this poem is not placed.
Kauffman Avatar
June 9, 2026 at 10:51 AM
Dearest Valsa, thank your for your sweet message. I was pleased to see that it did place fifth among such beautiful poems and precious memories! Sending you blessings and my gratitude, dear friend.
Godwin Avatar
June 4, 2026 at 7:39 PM
A lovely gem, very much so, Sam. (I see Kim also used 'lovely', lovely twice said is lovely wed to your pen's thread.)
Kauffman Avatar
June 9, 2026 at 10:48 AM
Hi CayCay! Thank you so much. Truly each colorful morning sunrise is a precious "gem" - a gift wrapped in amber, a promise wrapped in light. Thank you for your "lovely" message. Sending you blessings of loveliness and beauty.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 1, 2026 at 12:53 PM
Lovely!
Kauffman Avatar
June 2, 2026 at 2:14 PM
Thank you so much, Kim! There really is something miraculous about a brilliant sunrise! Blessings!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
May 25, 2026 at 4:53 PM
exquisite poem, Sam! beautiful imagery. Faving.
Kauffman Avatar
May 28, 2026 at 10:44 AM
Dearest Sara, Thank you so much!!! Your fav is an honor! Mornings when the sky dances with color make writing about them almost easy while having to choose which word or image to express such heaven sent beauty! I so appreciate your lovely words. Sending you blessings of beauty each morning! Hope you are doing well. I know you are busy with a new and wonderful adventure!
George Avatar
May 19, 2026 at 11:30 PM
Dear sweet Sam, this is a lovely Quatrain. 'Coral dawn, amber hues, gossamer streaks, pink chiffon' - choicest word coinages! What more can be included in a single Quatrain! I am bathed in the beauty of your 'dawn'. Into my FAVE
Kauffman Avatar
May 28, 2026 at 10:41 AM
Thank you so much for your sweet message, dear friend! It was fun to remember the feelings of hope and awe when experiencing a morning such as this one! So honored by your fave! Sending you blessings of beautiful mornings!
One Avatar
May 19, 2026 at 1:38 PM
This is so beautiful Sam, you have a wonderful way with words and I have not seen many who create imagery like your do.... We all love to sing a love poem..
Kauffman Avatar
May 28, 2026 at 10:33 AM
Thank you so much, SO! I am humbled and so grateful for your encouraging words. And, yes, we do love to sing a love song through a morning poem. Morning truly is a moment in time that we capture and long to hold onto every time I experience it's wonder. Sending you blessings of amber mornings!
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 19, 2026 at 6:37 AM
This is very sweet <3
Kauffman Avatar
May 19, 2026 at 11:20 AM
Thank you so much, BJ. Sometimes a misty colored sunrise is as sweet as cotton candy with it's beauty to be savored. Sending you blessings of sweet mornings!
Hind Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 11:44 PM
lovely !!
Kauffman Avatar
May 19, 2026 at 11:11 AM
Thank you for sharing the loveliness of a beautiful sunrise with me, Paige. Beauty is always more wonderful when it is shared! Blessings!
Valles Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 8:58 PM
Vivid and amazing!
Kauffman Avatar
May 19, 2026 at 11:04 AM
Tom, thank you! Sunrise is truly a spectacle to behold with all of its vibrant colors and hues! Even the sunrises when storms are approaching are a sight to savor. Sending you blessing, my friend.
Dietrich Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 4:47 PM
Gorgeous!
Kauffman Avatar
May 19, 2026 at 10:59 AM
Andrea, thank you! There is a rich lushness about a sunrise of soft colors! Sending you blessings of beautiful dawns.
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