Victor Buhagiar Poet Pantoum

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Memory of Our Honeymoon

Happy was our first night of married life,
Moonlight shined on your delightful visage,
Face up, red lips slightly apart, smiling.
I looked on a vision gratifying.

Moonlight shined on your delightful visage,
She walked slowly in a drowsy stupor,
I looked on a vision gratifying,
No hesitation to savor my prize.

She walked slowly in a drowsy stupor,
Divine love, how can I ever forget,
No hesitation to savor my prize.
Bliss and enchantment must last forever.

Divine love, how can I ever forget,
Face up, red lips slightly apart, smiling.
Bliss and enchantment must last forever,
Happy was our first night of married life.

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Beryl Edmonds August 25, 2022 at 6:12 AM A lovely memory Victor, a most romantic write… Belle

Jennifer Proxenos August 22, 2022 at 1:51 PM Hi Victor, wonderful memories, wonderful poem, wonderful honeymoon, look up at the sky tonight and pick out the brightest star, that is your wife. HUGS AND BLESSINGS, Jennifer.

Kim Rodrigues August 21, 2022 at 5:57 PM Love it! Sounds like a great beginning to happily ever after. Hugs ~ K8m

Paghunda Zahid August 21, 2022 at 11:10 AM Very creative and full of life and love. Well penned

Sara Kendrick August 21, 2022 at 6:06 AM Creative lines penned in this one. Very romantic. I am glad that I chose it to read today. Thank you for sharing and stopping by my page with a nice comment. Sara

Sunita U.D Palawon August 20, 2022 at 1:14 PM I love the way you compose this Phantoum while holding on the romantic flow of the subject. Great!! :) Sunita UPD

Anne-Lise Andresen August 20, 2022 at 12:48 PM - So beautiful and romantic written Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anitha Jayasankar August 20, 2022 at 8:39 AM You did this so well in Pantoum form Victor. Each line following the other, so well created and very romantic... Have a blessed day... ~ Ani

Linda Alice Fowler August 20, 2022 at 6:28 AM A romantic pantoum Victor. Very nice, Linda

Tania Kitchin August 20, 2022 at 12:45 AM Victor, a beautiful and romantic poem, you captured the essence of exciting young love!

Eve Roper August 19, 2022 at 6:18 PM Beautiful and well written Pantoum, my friend.

Andrea Dietrich August 19, 2022 at 12:38 PM hey, I came back here and I just noticed you posted this around Aug. 16. That was my 47th anniversary. Were you too married in August, Victor? Just curious. Victor Buhagiar August 21, 2022 at 5:06 AM I was married in January.

Michael Tor August 18, 2022 at 4:39 PM Victor your heart says it all here. You are so gifted and such an emotional writer, just love who you are and what you feel to express my friend. God bless you for doing so...

Besma Riabi Dziri August 18, 2022 at 1:10 AM You have a poetic power to carve with your words a whole scene that only Love has the supreme presence! You allowed your avid reader to get charmed by such heartwarming feel of so intimate state of soul bonding.. So genuine and cherished are the feelings that we relate to and savour.. Always an immense pleasure reading your so stunning poetry, Victor! You mark readers with your words of meaning and inspiration.. Hope you are doing great! My deepest regards and blessings.

Sotto Poet August 17, 2022 at 7:55 PM Wonderfully lyrical and lovely pantoum, Victor. You are reminiscing about precious memories, and your writing is rich with visual descriptions and superb word choice. This is undeniably due to the steadfast and unwavering affection you have for your loved one.

Harry Horsman August 16, 2022 at 8:01 PM This is so beautiful Victor, the scene set for the on coming years. the poetry, exquisite.

Andrea Dietrich August 16, 2022 at 1:35 PM i loved every line except drowsy stupor. Very romantic, Victor.

Evelyn Judy Buehler August 16, 2022 at 12:41 PM Your romantic pantoum, recalling cherished memories, is full of beautiful imagery. Wonderfully written, Victor.

Mystic Rose Rose August 16, 2022 at 12:29 PM You seem to remember the sparkle of that first night so well, and the best part is you describe it so charmingly, I love this Victor, precious and ever so beautiful !

I Am Anaya August 16, 2022 at 11:30 AM A beautiful woman, a delightful vision, anticipation of desire, a spell of romance! Sweet moments to savor and cherish. Enjoyed the scene!

Deb M August 16, 2022 at 9:34 AM So lovely Victor….I know you miss her terribly….Cuddles…Debx

Joseph May August 16, 2022 at 7:21 AM Memories that are cherished, Wonderful write Victor

Tom Cunningham August 16, 2022 at 6:08 AM Happy memories Victor that stay with you. Tom

Vijay Pandit August 16, 2022 at 5:56 AM Dwelling in memories--realm of love always delights as you so expertly convey, Victor. Excellent depiction, as always.

Alexis Y. August 16, 2022 at 5:44 AM WoW! Victor, You have penned such a well written and romantic Pantoum. I found it beautiful as well. You were blessed to find such a love. Thanks for sharing my friend-Alexis

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