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Line's Bite Size Contest No. 137 ~  3/6:2026

Memories Woven in My Heart

In dawn's pale light when dew drops glisten on heirloom roses near my garden wall, memories gently weave themselves in my heart like a web upon leaves a spider has begun. For lost love, tears fall in hues of melancholy blue as sunlight gilds my thoughts of missing you
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Jones Avatar
March 8, 2026 at 7:14 AM
Lin this is such a delicate beautiful piece full of imagery! Much deserved to win and congratulations!
Lane Avatar
March 9, 2026 at 1:00 AM
Thank you so much, Karen.
Neumann Avatar
March 8, 2026 at 1:40 AM
Sunlight. There is light within all darkness.
Lane Avatar
March 8, 2026 at 1:44 AM
Thank you for such a keen thought, Kai. We need only search to find it. ;-)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 7, 2026 at 11:58 AM
Sunlight gilds, like a heaviness. Hugs
Lane Avatar
March 7, 2026 at 12:20 PM
Thanks for always being around, Kim. It's nice to know some who've been here for a long time are still posting and commenting. Hugs.
Cunningham Avatar
March 7, 2026 at 12:24 AM
It's hard to let go of memories painful as they may be. Tom
Lane Avatar
March 7, 2026 at 1:04 AM
Yes it is. Tom and we can’t simply brush them away when they come calling. Thanks.
Allison Avatar
March 6, 2026 at 5:03 PM
a true gem of a poem Lin, what an emotional write! hugs jan
Lane Avatar
March 7, 2026 at 1:02 AM
Thanks a lot, chick. ;-)
Goldsmith Avatar
March 6, 2026 at 1:10 PM
WOW!!! What a beautiful write/pink rose picture you have here. Love Both... "Good Luck" Have a very blessed day/weekend writing away............
Lane Avatar
March 6, 2026 at 3:20 PM
Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts, Paula.
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