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The summer air was still, 'neath golden sky where lively birdsong filled motionless trees sun shied away while cirrus clouds passed by air cooled and briefly birthed a subtle breeze. The scent was fleeting, but I recognised the petrol fumes mixed with newly mown grass the present scene replaced before my eyes with summer childhood from some decades past. Dad's Suffolk Punch striping the long back lawn mums gossipped, back and forth like free range hens kids coming home, hands muddy, trousers torn a snack, a drink, then off to play again. Though age must smother youth, those times long gone memories on the breeze will linger on For contest 'one in five', sponsor Joseph May January 28th 2018

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Date: 2/17/2018 6:01:00 PM
Back to congratulate you Viv, on your win. I haven't been able to post anything at soup because of ads that were jumping all over the screen. The problem has finally been fixed. : )
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Viv Wigley
Date: 2/18/2018 1:06:00 AM
Thanks, Connie, yes, I know they pay for the websites to funcyion, but the ads are really annoying sometimes. Viv x
Date: 2/15/2018 10:54:00 PM
All the best and big congrats on your wonderful win in Joseph's contest, Viv - blessings as always, my friend! :-)
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Date: 2/12/2018 3:06:00 PM
Nostalgia! Congrats on your fine win, Viv.
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Date: 2/7/2018 7:55:00 PM
A familiar memory from this former small town resident. Great line, "Though age must smother youth..." So true. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/8/2018 3:09:00 AM
Thanks, Reason, I enjoyed composing and thinking back. Regards, Viv
Date: 1/31/2018 1:40:00 AM
I love the humor that always creeps into your poetry Viv. Like this classic line: "mums gossipped, back and forth like free range hens".This nostalgic poem is going into my Faves! I hope it is a winner! : )
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Date: 2/1/2018 11:41:00 PM
Thanks, Connie, I was going to use 'cackle', but some of the mothers are still alive and I don't want a witch hunt x
Date: 1/31/2018 1:24:00 AM
oh I love this, Viv. This was the other theme of the five that i had considered because I love nostalgic poems. I think this one will score high.
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Date: 1/31/2018 1:36:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea, to be honest I was struggling to think of something for the other themes, and I am a fan of memories. probably because they're getting further away, and I try to cling on to them x
Date: 1/30/2018 2:18:00 AM
This is gorgeous, Viv, beautiful imagery and a touch of melancholy that takes me back to my childhood days growing up on the lake. This deserves a fav, (and a good placement). Blessings!
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Date: 1/29/2018 12:14:00 AM
Lovely memories of childhood...a door that's closed but is always open to our memories. Very nice, Viv.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 1/30/2018 12:43:00 AM
Thanks, Carole, precious things indeed. Viv x

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