Memories On Branches

I remember well the walks we took, along the river's bed
We pledged our love beneath wild oaks, as leaves were turning red
The morning fresh with sparks of dew so softly dripping down
that sprinkled teardrops on our heads, like diamonds in a crown.
A crimson sky, as colors changed, would quickly say goodbye
would come as no surprise to us, though the season swooned to cry.

We'd bundled warm, then stroll along, still charmed by nights of love
while branches of the autumn trees, would scatter light above
The trees would shed their amber leaves,...gold changed from rust to brown
and as we walked, I do recall, the change of season's sound
The silence of each season fell, and all the green was gone

And then in snow, the nights would fall, and branches pillowed high
Our muffled footsteps, walked through lace of winter's lullaby
We'd still hold hands, and through the gloves, I felt the love you held
Beneath the boughs, the snow came down, until the springtime fell
It finally came, while blossoms sprang, quite captured in the spell,
and budding boughs, held fragrant scent, and somehow birds could tell...

A robin sang, to welcome us, and meadow larks were heard
The petals flew upon the wind, and soon the green returned
A breeze announced the changing guard, and summer was disturbed
We would sit, while petals fell, and catch them from above
Our shelter in the seasons past.......at last had christened love




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3/7/14 By Carrie Richards
Written for "Memories On Branches" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Nehls Avatar
June 18, 2014 at 2:28 PM
What a wonderful love story, Carrie. You painted such a vivid and beautiful picture, so easy to see. Very magnificently done..... Robert.
Harper Avatar
April 7, 2014 at 1:31 PM
Gorgeous poem, Carrie, worthy of your win, I love how it sings.
Kendrick Avatar
April 7, 2014 at 12:01 PM
At the top with your passionate winning work..Congrats..Sara
Macfarlane Avatar
April 7, 2014 at 10:41 AM
Carrie, a beautiful and lovely write. Big congrats on your win. Hugs
A. Sharma Avatar
April 7, 2014 at 7:38 AM
Very well written Carrie ! A deserved top win, congrats !!
May Avatar
April 7, 2014 at 6:35 AM
Splendid write...congrats on your win
Dillard Avatar
April 6, 2014 at 11:28 PM
Once again enjoying your work! Congratulations! RAY
Lawless Avatar
April 6, 2014 at 8:20 PM
Nicely done, Carrie. A long walk that, through the seasons.
Guzzi Avatar
April 6, 2014 at 7:29 PM
Well it sure met the mark this time! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Gorelick Avatar
April 6, 2014 at 6:43 PM
Breathtaking..congrat Carrie. BG
George   Avatar
March 13, 2014 at 5:10 AM
A True Masterpiece, dear Carrie. You are a poetess in the truest sense of the word. This goes to my favorites. Elaine George
Mohn Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 9:49 PM
Wow Carrie...every line fits like a glove, Really wonderful!
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