Memories On Branches

Scrumptious sight of prairies and grass Ardent beaming of flower buds and buzzing bees Leafless coils, branches of trees become alive Hastening! Arousing everyone's joy and vive Everyone happy on cheerful springtime! A cotillion trips and chirps of jolly birds From some distance, I have started to heard Fantastic shun and kisses of pretty butterflies Tempting all species of flora and fauna to thrive Welcoming, beckoning the heat of summertime! First crisp of breeze, creating dew in morning Canopy of red and orange leaves from branches, enchanting! Turning the world into a canvass of nature's brush Unnoticeable, such romantic dash making anyone blush Revel, embrace the sweet amorous season of autumn! Solid chilling raindrops of snowflakes Giving warning: careful during breaks Covering branches, bringing icy cold aches Yet, skiing an exhilarating cool escape Delight in the coolness ambiance of winter! BY olive_eloi 2:22 pm 02/26/2014 CONTEST: MEMORIES ON BRANCHES SPONSOR: GAIL ANGEL DOYLE 4TH PLACE

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James Fraser

Date: 12/4/2014 2:13:00 PM

I love this poem Olive. It makes me want to jump into your poem and live them. You sure have talent, you sure have style. Poetry's in you, and it makes me smile. Most definitely a favourite for me, James :) :)

Paul Callus

Date: 4/7/2014 3:27:00 PM

Good for you Olive_eloi !!:) congrats on your fine placing. Unfortunately I had missed this poem before, but now I realize what a beautiful write you managed to create; apart from the ideas also personification and strong imagery. I give you high rating :) a girl for all seasons :) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/7/2014 3:41:00 PM

thanks Paul.. :) i wasn't at all expecting though as I myself didn't experience this in real.. :) i only see it on movies... :D and imagine it.. :) +olive_eloi with a wave

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 4/7/2014 2:20:00 PM

Strong verses here, Olive, you convey much to appreciate about tree branches. Congratulations on your win!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/7/2014 2:43:00 PM

thank you for passing by :) appreciate it.. :) though in Philippines we don't have really that four seasons.. :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/7/2014 7:54:00 AM

Real snowflakes I cud feel Olive !! Great poem n win ! Congrats !!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/7/2014 2:35:00 PM

THANK YOU FOR DROPPING BY :) to God the greatest glory :)

Darren Watson

Date: 3/2/2014 5:04:00 AM

Sensational poem . Going to be keeping my eye on you . You are more than a bit special.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/2/2014 5:25:00 PM

:) thanks for a drop by darren... :D God bless us all.. :) what your favorite season?