Memories On Branches

Scrumptious sight of prairies and grass
       Ardent beaming of flower buds and buzzing bees
         Leafless coils, branches of trees become alive
          Hastening! Arousing everyone's joy and vive
             Everyone happy on cheerful springtime!

             A cotillion trips and chirps of jolly birds
         From some distance, I have started to heard
         Fantastic shun and kisses of pretty butterflies
       Tempting all species of flora and fauna to thrive
        Welcoming, beckoning the heat of summertime!

         First crisp of breeze, creating dew in morning
Canopy of red and orange leaves from branches, enchanting!
      Turning the world into a canvass of nature's brush
  Unnoticeable, such romantic dash making anyone blush
  Revel, embrace the sweet amorous season of autumn!

                 Solid chilling raindrops of snowflakes
                Giving warning: careful during breaks
            Covering branches, bringing icy cold aches
                Yet, skiing an exhilarating cool escape
             Delight in the coolness ambiance of winter!

                                         BY
                                    olive_eloi
                                     2:22 pm
                                   02/26/2014

CONTEST: MEMORIES ON BRANCHES
SPONSOR: GAIL ANGEL DOYLE
4TH PLACE
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Fraser Avatar
December 4, 2014 at 2:13 PM
I love this poem Olive. It makes me want to jump into your poem and live them. You sure have talent, you sure have style. Poetry's in you, and it makes me smile. Most definitely a favourite for me, James :) :)
Callus Avatar
April 7, 2014 at 3:27 PM
Good for you Olive_eloi !!:) congrats on your fine placing. Unfortunately I had missed this poem before, but now I realize what a beautiful write you managed to create; apart from the ideas also personification and strong imagery. I give you high rating :) a girl for all seasons :) // paul
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
April 7, 2014 at 3:41 PM
thanks Paul.. :) i wasn't at all expecting though as I myself didn't experience this in real.. :) i only see it on movies... :D and imagine it.. :) +olive_eloi with a wave
Harper Avatar
April 7, 2014 at 2:20 PM
Strong verses here, Olive, you convey much to appreciate about tree branches. Congratulations on your win!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
April 7, 2014 at 2:43 PM
thank you for passing by :) appreciate it.. :) though in Philippines we don't have really that four seasons.. :)
A. Sharma Avatar
April 7, 2014 at 7:54 AM
Real snowflakes I cud feel Olive !! Great poem n win ! Congrats !!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
April 7, 2014 at 2:35 PM
THANK YOU FOR DROPPING BY :) to God the greatest glory :)
Watson Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 5:04 AM
Sensational poem . Going to be keeping my eye on you . You are more than a bit special.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 5:25 PM
:) thanks for a drop by darren... :D God bless us all.. :) what your favorite season?
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