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Memories of Kel

It’s so long since I saw her that I forget so much now, yet dream I smell her perfume, stroke her soft hair, see her dark eyes, And then I wake and remember the fights when we parted.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/7/2011 12:24:00 PM

I seem to have memories of this lovely sijo, jack! Congrats on your Memories of Kel.

Elaine George

Date: 5/6/2011 4:20:00 AM

Powerful Sijo, Jack. Many congrats on your SENSATIONAL WIN. Lainie

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/5/2011 8:02:00 PM

a sheer write with my best cheeers for the high win, jack.. what a beauty! ;) huggs!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/5/2011 3:31:00 PM

So pleased to see your placing high in the contest, Jack. Congratulations on a job well done! Love, Carolyn

Tahera Mannan

Date: 5/4/2011 9:49:00 PM

Wow Jack super write. Many warm congrats for this win.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 5/4/2011 1:36:00 PM

Congrats my friend on your win!!!

Emma Buckeridge

Date: 5/4/2011 12:31:00 PM

Congrats on your win and creative write :o)

Gautami Phookan

Date: 5/4/2011 12:20:00 PM

Congrats Jack on your win with this very creative Sijo...Loved it...gautami

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/4/2011 11:25:00 AM

Congratulations Jack on your win in Adeleke's contest "Sweet Sijo". Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 5/4/2011 10:13:00 AM

Jack , it's great to see you in the top three again. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honor in place. Agape, Moses

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/4/2011 8:45:00 AM

Such a bittersweet memory.....what a lovely poem of lost love! Well done, Jack!! Congratulations!!!

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 5/4/2011 6:41:00 AM

Thanks Jack for supporting my contest. This piece caught my attention so much, it's so creative. Congrats on your 2nd place win in the contest, keep your passionate pen performing on this pleasant platform... poetry, which you all the best sir. Adeleke

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/4/2011 6:18:00 AM

A big congrats to you...you got it just right. lol..BG

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/4/2011 5:55:00 AM

Hey Jack! Congrats on this awesome sijo! Such a romantic piece that conjures up deep emotion. Blessings, Gwendolen

Shani Fassbender

Date: 5/4/2011 5:25:00 AM

Very well written. Congrats on your winning poem!

Cory Long

Date: 5/4/2011 4:41:00 AM

congrats on your win..cory

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/4/2011 4:39:00 AM

Congrats Jack and way to go my friend on your 2nd place win in Sweet Sijo contest with this excellent three lines of power .. enjoy luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/4/2011 4:28:00 AM

Congratulations on the second place win in the contest, jack

Gert W. Knop

Date: 3/20/2011 7:59:00 AM

I can feel with you, Jack, although we had no fights when we parted!....Have a great week! By the was I also wrote two longer theathre play an a number of short ones which never where staged...All the best...Gert:)

James Fraser

Date: 3/19/2011 6:09:00 AM

Sad memories resonating from your words Jack. Have a lovely weekend....:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/18/2011 4:45:00 PM

thankxx Jack.. appreciate the luv and encouraging words of congrats my friend.. back at ya..

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/18/2011 12:28:00 PM

It's amazing how we miss certain things and tend to forget about the the bad moments only to have those memories creep up on us without warning.. Love this write of your Jack, if for the contest, all the best to you :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/18/2011 12:23:00 PM

I just can't believe how fast this week has gone by. I am enjoying reading the many magnificent poems here at PoetrySoup today. I am glad yours was among the ones I was able to read Jack. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with sunshine and lots of inspiration. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/18/2011 8:53:00 AM

A tender, nostalgic sijo, Jack. We tend to remember the good times we shared with those we love. When we let go of the dreams, however, the fights are foremost in our minds. Best wishes in the sijo contest, my friend! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/18/2011 4:57:00 AM

So many will relate to this piece Jack.. very 'today' and cleverly written my friend.. good luck in the new contest .. happy weekend too..