Memories In Tune

Funny how a sound can be so stirring,
so evocative of the past,
of a certain time and place in our lives.
Yet each time I hear the chimes, I am transported.

Once again, my youthful feet traverse the rickety
wooden floorboards of our local “Five and Dime” 
buzzing past the coloring books and crayons,
ignoring the buttery invitation of fresh popped corn.

And my destination? It was the little corner,
way in the back.
Back there, I was a million miles away
There, I would find treasures from all over the world,
bright colors in every hue, shiny fabrics, 
wooden boxes and my favorite, the wind chimes!

Of Asian design, they were constructed of red metal
rings from which scarlet silk strings dangled hand
painted glass panels. Each one was decorated with
lettering that I thought surely rivaled the proverbs
that I’d find in a fortune cookie!
The last detail was a tiny red tassel,
adorning the bottom of every delicate pane.

And as the perfume of popcorn dissipated, it was
replaced by the exotic aroma of incense from a
far away land. The glow of its burn warmed
the lap of a jade Buddha guarding the top shelf.

When saved pennies allowed the purchase
of my two dollar treasure, it became my
most cherished possession.

Whenever I hear wind chimes, I smell that incense,
I see those red tassels and I feel the breezes that
caressed my back porch and gently crafted
the delightful tune of a childhood memory.


8/20/18
Wind Chimes Poetry Contest
Edward Ibeh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Roper Avatar
September 15, 2018 at 7:49 PM
Congratulations on your win, Mike, I like that you use the contest as memories brought back. ~`* Hugs Eve
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September 16, 2018 at 6:28 AM
Thank so much Eve xxoo
Allison Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 2:44 PM
Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Mike:-) hugs Jan xx
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September 1, 2018 at 3:17 PM
Thanks Jan xxoo
Ibeh Avatar
August 29, 2018 at 2:38 PM
Thanks for entering my contest, Mike!:-) Very well-written piece! Congratulations on your deserving win!
Gentile Avatar
August 29, 2018 at 3:35 PM
Thank you so much, I very much appreciate it, It was great fun !!!!
Wolf Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 11:26 AM
Nicely done. Such a precious memory, to cherish forever,... and which is now saved forever, Mike, with this wonderful write. Great job! ~ Gershon
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August 21, 2018 at 12:06 PM
Thanks so much, Gershon !!
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August 21, 2018 at 6:14 AM
Memories well expressed Mike...great verse my friend...best of luck...love & tunes...^WW^
Gentile Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 7:25 AM
Thanks so much WW I appreciate your kind words!!!
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August 20, 2018 at 4:18 PM
Very sweet. Sound like a kids paradise. Good luck in the contest!
Gentile Avatar
August 20, 2018 at 6:57 PM
Thanks so much Dale!!
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August 20, 2018 at 3:53 PM
Reminiscing in childhood memories your poem delightfully recalls the happy corner that felt like a special possession..the joy felt then, still flows in your words..best for a win, Mike.
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August 20, 2018 at 6:58 PM
Thanks as always Vijay!!
Allison Avatar
August 20, 2018 at 3:51 PM
oh what wonderful imagery Mike,I so enjoyed your fascinating story and wonderful memories:-) my son has been given some wind chimes but they are made of pottery and so he daren't even unpack the box for fear they will smash.:-) hugs Jan xx
Gentile Avatar
August 20, 2018 at 7:00 PM
Thanks so much, Jan, I would love to see those old chimes again, that was over 50 years ago, yikes!!!!
Sands Avatar
August 20, 2018 at 2:50 PM
I loved this journey your poem took me on and the sweet simplicity of the beautiful wind chimes. Great descriptions in this, well written Mike :)
Gentile Avatar
August 20, 2018 at 3:05 PM
Thank so much Heidi, I am really glad that you liked it xxoo Happy Monday!
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