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Memories In Tune

Funny how a sound can be so stirring, so evocative of the past, of a certain time and place in our lives. Yet each time I hear the chimes, I am transported. Once again, my youthful feet traverse the rickety wooden floorboards of our local “Five and Dime” buzzing past the coloring books and crayons, ignoring the buttery invitation of fresh popped corn. And my destination? It was the little corner, way in the back. Back there, I was a million miles away There, I would find treasures from all over the world, bright colors in every hue, shiny fabrics, wooden boxes and my favorite, the wind chimes! Of Asian design, they were constructed of red metal rings from which scarlet silk strings dangled hand painted glass panels. Each one was decorated with lettering that I thought surely rivaled the proverbs that I’d find in a fortune cookie! The last detail was a tiny red tassel, adorning the bottom of every delicate pane. And as the perfume of popcorn dissipated, it was replaced by the exotic aroma of incense from a far away land. The glow of its burn warmed the lap of a jade Buddha guarding the top shelf. When saved pennies allowed the purchase of my two dollar treasure, it became my most cherished possession. Whenever I hear wind chimes, I smell that incense, I see those red tassels and I feel the breezes that caressed my back porch and gently crafted the delightful tune of a childhood memory. 8/20/18 Wind Chimes Poetry Contest Edward Ibeh

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Date: 9/15/2018 7:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Mike, I like that you use the contest as memories brought back. ~`* Hugs Eve
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/16/2018 6:28:00 AM
Thank so much Eve xxoo
Date: 9/1/2018 2:44:00 PM
Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Mike:-) hugs Jan xx
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/1/2018 3:17:00 PM
Thanks Jan xxoo
Date: 8/29/2018 2:38:00 PM
Thanks for entering my contest, Mike!:-) Very well-written piece! Congratulations on your deserving win!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 8/29/2018 3:35:00 PM
Thank you so much, I very much appreciate it, It was great fun !!!!
Date: 8/21/2018 11:26:00 AM
Nicely done. Such a precious memory, to cherish forever,... and which is now saved forever, Mike, with this wonderful write. Great job! ~ Gershon
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Mike Gentile
Date: 8/21/2018 12:06:00 PM
Thanks so much, Gershon !!
Date: 8/21/2018 6:14:00 AM
Memories well expressed Mike...great verse my friend...best of luck...love & tunes...^WW^
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Mike Gentile
Date: 8/21/2018 7:25:00 AM
Thanks so much WW I appreciate your kind words!!!
Date: 8/20/2018 4:18:00 PM
Very sweet. Sound like a kids paradise. Good luck in the contest!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 8/20/2018 6:57:00 PM
Thanks so much Dale!!
Date: 8/20/2018 3:53:00 PM
Reminiscing in childhood memories your poem delightfully recalls the happy corner that felt like a special possession..the joy felt then, still flows in your words..best for a win, Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 8/20/2018 6:58:00 PM
Thanks as always Vijay!!
Date: 8/20/2018 3:51:00 PM
oh what wonderful imagery Mike,I so enjoyed your fascinating story and wonderful memories:-) my son has been given some wind chimes but they are made of pottery and so he daren't even unpack the box for fear they will smash.:-) hugs Jan xx
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Mike Gentile
Date: 8/20/2018 7:00:00 PM
Thanks so much, Jan, I would love to see those old chimes again, that was over 50 years ago, yikes!!!!
Date: 8/20/2018 2:50:00 PM
I loved this journey your poem took me on and the sweet simplicity of the beautiful wind chimes. Great descriptions in this, well written Mike :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 8/20/2018 3:05:00 PM
Thank so much Heidi, I am really glad that you liked it xxoo Happy Monday!

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