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Memories Beyond the Door

Fly away from the memories The ghosts of past trailed, never stop to chase A journey finally brings me back Back to the same door that I used to open The breezes that I never forgotten The odor of the hall that never change I stood at the edge of my gate's sanity, the lips of an old trip Be ready for the first gusts of my treasures' pasts Vacant room is just like what I've thought No passer, no shadow, only me in this big hollow I reached the dusty quilt, cover up my self This is my comfort zone, while I sit among a loss Tears of yearn never melt, I assume it has dried Maybe it goes to some other places Where nobody or nothing could even see or realized Missing out this place, I think this is too much The reflection of my bitter sweet memories reeled out Playing the same scene at the same place where I stood Where I can see those people who once ever filled this empty room Those people who now fill the empty space of heaven's room April 29, 2013 7th place Memories Beyond The Door Free Poetry Contest Sponsor Constance La France

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Date: 9/8/2013 7:34:00 PM
very well done,,,,, and you placed with it ;}
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 9/12/2013 5:37:00 PM
Thanks Debbie glad to have your visit here :) hug, yannyb
Date: 5/21/2013 7:27:00 AM
Yanny, this is so beautiful and profound. "I stood at the edge of my gate's sanity, the lips of an old trip"...WOW! You are a fav poet for me Yanny. Lots of love for you. :-)
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 5/21/2013 9:36:00 AM
Hehehe, thank you Mike, it is really a pleasure to have such a lovely encouraging compliment by you :Dwishing you a wonderful day there :D hug, yanny
Date: 5/17/2013 8:00:00 AM
Thanks for you visits yesterday. I am missing your writing. I keep coming back hoping to find something new. Feed me, feed me.....;0)
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 5/17/2013 9:00:00 AM
Hehehe, I've been busy lately, it will be over soon around 2 more weeks, I really missed my inspiring time to write hehehe, one is still in progress, I will post it soon, and thank you for keep encouraging me to write :D glad to have your visit today too :D wishing you a lovely day, hug, yanny
Date: 5/13/2013 8:43:00 AM
Hello Yanny, I hope you and your mom enjoyed yesterday.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 5/16/2013 9:29:00 AM
Hello Rick sure we are having a nice day here, glad to see you around Rick :D hug, yanny
Date: 5/10/2013 11:05:00 AM
Good entry! Really heartfelt! Congratulations!
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 5/11/2013 9:11:00 AM
Thank you Caleah, your comment made my day :D wishing you a lovely day there, hug, Yanny
Date: 5/10/2013 5:31:00 AM
Hi Yanny, it's not everyday that I bump into a talented Indonesian poet who also write in English so it was a great pleasure to have your encouraging comment on my poem. I feel that there is something so tender in the persona's melancholy it hurts me inside. It's not the razor-sharp kind of hurt but more like being, I don't know, pinched? The emotion creeps so silently and so gradually it hurts worse than it should have. Thanks for sharing such an emotional piece Yanny!
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 5/10/2013 10:05:00 AM
Thank you Adam, it is also a pleasure for me to have such an encouragement comment by a talented Indonesian Poet like you too :D and thank you for your kindly visit today, wishing you a lovely day there :D hug, yanny
Date: 5/9/2013 11:10:00 PM
many congrats on your win in the contest
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 5/10/2013 4:01:00 AM
Thank you Francine, yours are fascinating as well :) wishing you a wonderful day :) hug, yanny
Date: 5/9/2013 6:05:00 PM
A special write Yanny ..congratulations
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 5/9/2013 6:47:00 PM
Thank you Donna, glad to have your kindly visit here :) wishing you a lovely day :D hug, yanny
Date: 5/9/2013 2:51:00 PM
Congratulations Yanny. Tender words. Love, Joyce
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 5/9/2013 6:47:00 PM
Thank you Joyce :) hug, yanny
Date: 5/9/2013 12:50:00 PM
Not knowing it has already been judged. Congrats on your win.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 5/9/2013 6:46:00 PM
Thank you Abdul :D hug, yanny
Date: 5/9/2013 10:47:00 AM
Well done Yanny~A.O
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 5/9/2013 6:42:00 PM
Thank you Abdul for your kindly visit, and glad that you comeback again to say congrats :D wishing you a wonderful day there :D hug, yanny
Date: 5/6/2013 9:07:00 PM
Hi Yanny, you reeled me in on every line, this is a very well thought out piece. I so much loved the last line. Perfect, blessings, Carl
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 5/6/2013 9:29:00 PM
Thank you Carl, your comment really make my day :D wishing you a wonderful day :D
Date: 5/5/2013 10:27:00 AM
WOW. This is excellent. The images powerful and haunting. Your talent is amazing
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 5/6/2013 7:19:00 PM
Thank you Karen your writes also talented as well :D thank you for your kindly visit and wishing a wonderful day Karen, hug, yanny
Date: 5/3/2013 8:36:00 AM
Good night Yanny.hugs Rick
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 5/3/2013 10:36:00 AM
Good morning Rick, hug back :)
Date: 5/1/2013 7:45:00 PM
Breathtaking piece! Moving to my favorites. It appears your Muse has returned and has been kind. Well done Yanny.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/2/2013 8:19:00 AM
Hugs back
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 5/1/2013 9:23:00 PM
Thanks Rick! You make my day! :D wishing you a lovely day :D hug, yanny
Date: 5/1/2013 12:30:00 PM
Beautiful. Good luck in the contest and in mending your heart. I entered this contest as well. Check mine out if you like :) love, JuliMichelle
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 5/1/2013 9:23:00 PM
Done checking :D yours beautiful as well Juli, love the dark emo in there :D thank you for your kindly visit and wishing you a wonderful day :D hug, yanny
Date: 4/30/2013 9:28:00 AM
Yanny, it's so beautiful but yet so sad. - Create new pleasant memories .... without tears - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 4/30/2013 9:34:00 AM
Thank you Anne, yeah I realized that lately I wrote so many sad poems, I will try to change this somber mood :D thank you for your input Anne I will try my best :D glad for always having your support here :D hug, yanny

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