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"Mom, you are gone to heaven above but not forgotten, missed every moment of every day. You are not with me in this realm. Yet, I feel your spirit in all things that I do." Quote by _Constance I have lost many loved people in my life and I live with my forever grief the love lost that hurts the most to me was my sweet mother's sad death my anchor and safe harbor she always encouraged me to write to be the best I could be and she taught me gardening now, my mother tends God's heavenly garden mother was so full of joy and mirth for life she was kind to everyone she met had not an enemy in this world but she got sick- sick for years she faced illness with courage I was proud of her each day then, one day things went wrong she was in the hospital on a life support machine and I said, please doctor turn the machine's off I knew my mother and how she wanted to live it was not on a life support machine I cannot explain how hard it was but, I felt God holding my hand and then, she was gone from me like a bird she flew straight to heaven for days I was just an empty shell as whispers flowed- you can do this and I taught you to be strong daughter so, I lifted my head up greeting the people who came to bid Mom goodbye __________________________ January 22, 2023 Poetry/Free Verse/memories at her funeral Copyright Protected, ID 01-1519-486-22 All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France Written for the Premiere contest, Loved and Lost sponsor, Regina McIntosh, Judged 01/26/2023 Ninth Place

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Date: 1/28/2023 7:14:00 AM
oh, boy, i've got tears in my eyes reading this heartfelt & heartbreaking write, my friend x
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Constance La France
Date: 1/28/2023 8:46:00 AM
Jack, thank you so much for the visit, compassion and compliment, blessings ~Constance
Date: 1/28/2023 6:28:00 AM
Beautiful and touching. Congratulations on your win Constance! :)
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Constance La France
Date: 1/28/2023 6:55:00 AM
Linda, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings, Constance
Date: 1/27/2023 3:12:00 PM
I know the feeling, too. You described your feelings well and your poem carries the readers deeply along as your grief/conviction can be felt.
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Constance La France
Date: 1/28/2023 5:36:00 AM
Connie, thank you so much for your visit, comment and compliment, yes, all people have felt this sort of pain that is the price of love, blessings, Constance

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